Waterfall

In one river in a valley
on its journey to the sea;
water cannot be compressed
so forces endlessly
around fallen logs and shale,
with barriers, no rest at all,
and then displays its power
when becomes a waterfall.

Flowing rushes constantly
over rock, shadow and fern,
falling free and noisily;
there is no tide to turn.
There’s rainbows in the mist
of the tumbling cascade 
until a settling pool
where the waterfall does fade.

We can stand back in awe;
see many natural features,
and perhaps get a glimpse
of wary living creatures,
where a waterfall’s a barrier
for life in waters deep,
who gather in the pool,
for the climb is rather steep. 

But Mother Nature’s instinct 
with a plan, wait patiently 
for a rage filled deluge
before traveling to the sea.
It is them against the flood
in a reverse tug of war,
with repeat of generations
like those of years before.

In natures natural beauty
and its amazing scenery;
from outback to the ocean;
inland brown to greenery.
On lakes, coastal estuaries,
where mountain ash grows tall;
few vistas match the pleasure, 
of gazing at a waterfall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Beaufort Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 7:55 AM
And now I apologize for my confusion. It was written by you Lindsay--so my words are for you and not Connie. It's early in the AM, and now I am really laughing at myself.
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November 18, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Simply beautiful Connie. I really loved this. From a scientific point of view you even got in the fact that liquids don't compress well. That is truly amazing. You are in a beautiful place, and it is my pleasure to be able to share it through your words. Thanks for that for today's happy beginning. I will even look at the kitchen sink differently (lol)!
Laurie Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Crikey Duke, if somebody reading a poem I wrote matches Connie with it, I feel privileged. I'm a real lover of natural beauty in words or art form. The march of humanity is a real threat though - thank you Duke - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 10:47 PM
I loved the journey of freedom this enchanting piece took me on Lindsay. Beautifully crafted my friend! : )
Laurie Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 5:53 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting Connie. I always look forward to receiving your views - catch you soon Connie - Lindsay
La France Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Lindsay, your poem is wonderful, so many awesome lines, well done ~
Laurie Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Hello Dear Heart … thank you for reading and your positive comment. I do appreciate it - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 7:27 PM
In this poem, I'd say Water rose! Elevations! ~ Gershon
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November 13, 2018 at 5:49 PM
G'day Gershon … thanks for reading Gershon. What happens is, after heavy rain, fish always tend to want to move upstream, but only a few make it up a waterfall, usually by moving from pool to pool on the edge of the waterfall - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 8:27 PM
Are you sure your wife didn't dictate that? Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 5:44 PM
Hello Rico … not at all Rico. Her dictating would have been "when are we going home?" Thank you Rico - Lindsay
Onclaud Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 4:25 PM
fluently written as you lines cascade with rhythmic tones, laura... awesome!...huggs
Laurie Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 5:39 PM
Hello nette … thank you for reading and your positive comment. I do appreciate it - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Had to read this again, still had tears in my eyes from the last one. Well written Lindsay. Tom.
Laurie Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 5:42 PM
G'day there Tom … I trust the tears are from laughing. I'd hate to think my verse was so bad it made you cry - once again, thanks for your support Tom - Lindsay
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