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Waterfall

In one river in a valley on its journey to the sea; water cannot be compressed so forces endlessly around fallen logs and shale, with barriers, no rest at all, and then displays its power when becomes a waterfall. Flowing rushes constantly over rock, shadow and fern, falling free and noisily; there is no tide to turn. There’s rainbows in the mist of the tumbling cascade until a settling pool where the waterfall does fade. We can stand back in awe; see many natural features, and perhaps get a glimpse of wary living creatures, where a waterfall’s a barrier for life in waters deep, who gather in the pool, for the climb is rather steep. But Mother Nature’s instinct with a plan, wait patiently for a rage filled deluge before traveling to the sea. It is them against the flood in a reverse tug of war, with repeat of generations like those of years before. In natures natural beauty and its amazing scenery; from outback to the ocean; inland brown to greenery. On lakes, coastal estuaries, where mountain ash grows tall; few vistas match the pleasure, of gazing at a waterfall.

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Date: 11/18/2018 7:55:00 AM
And now I apologize for my confusion. It was written by you Lindsay--so my words are for you and not Connie. It's early in the AM, and now I am really laughing at myself.
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Date: 11/18/2018 7:53:00 AM
Simply beautiful Connie. I really loved this. From a scientific point of view you even got in the fact that liquids don't compress well. That is truly amazing. You are in a beautiful place, and it is my pleasure to be able to share it through your words. Thanks for that for today's happy beginning. I will even look at the kitchen sink differently (lol)!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/20/2018 7:46:00 PM
Crikey Duke, if somebody reading a poem I wrote matches Connie with it, I feel privileged. I'm a real lover of natural beauty in words or art form. The march of humanity is a real threat though - thank you Duke - Lindsay
Date: 11/12/2018 10:47:00 PM
I loved the journey of freedom this enchanting piece took me on Lindsay. Beautifully crafted my friend! : )
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/13/2018 5:53:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting Connie. I always look forward to receiving your views - catch you soon Connie - Lindsay
Date: 11/12/2018 4:13:00 PM
Lindsay, your poem is wonderful, so many awesome lines, well done ~
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/13/2018 5:51:00 PM
Hello Dear Heart … thank you for reading and your positive comment. I do appreciate it - Lindsay
Date: 11/11/2018 7:27:00 PM
In this poem, I'd say Water rose! Elevations! ~ Gershon
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/13/2018 5:49:00 PM
G'day Gershon … thanks for reading Gershon. What happens is, after heavy rain, fish always tend to want to move upstream, but only a few make it up a waterfall, usually by moving from pool to pool on the edge of the waterfall - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
Date: 11/10/2018 8:27:00 PM
Are you sure your wife didn't dictate that? Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/13/2018 5:44:00 PM
Hello Rico … not at all Rico. Her dictating would have been "when are we going home?" Thank you Rico - Lindsay
Date: 11/10/2018 4:25:00 PM
Had to read this again, still had tears in my eyes from the last one. Well written Lindsay. Tom.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/13/2018 5:42:00 PM
G'day there Tom … I trust the tears are from laughing. I'd hate to think my verse was so bad it made you cry - once again, thanks for your support Tom - Lindsay
Date: 11/10/2018 4:25:00 PM
fluently written as you lines cascade with rhythmic tones, laura... awesome!...huggs
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/13/2018 5:39:00 PM
Hello nette … thank you for reading and your positive comment. I do appreciate it - Lindsay

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