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Water Song For Kevin On His Birthday

Water Song deep in thought I seem to be yet water song it calls to me across the hills into the glens and down the forest toward a bend where aged oak and beech do blend into a wood both deep and fair the water sings its magic there inside my head it echoes still from pretty pool to dancing rill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/2/2017 8:58:00 AM
Silly me. I've just spotted the subtle rhyming throughout this lovely poem, which really became apparent when I read it aloud. Beautifully done.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/2/2017 9:15:00 AM
Gracias amigo!
Date: 9/2/2017 7:11:00 AM
Lovely imagery. It greatly appeals to my senses. Simply stated words that work together to speak of nostalgia perhaps, or longing. Love the rhyme in the last two lines. Lucky Kevin
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Pipping Stars
Date: 9/2/2017 9:45:00 AM
"face to facet" ... wheres the drill bits ... lol ... sorry to intrude ... but ... thats awesomeness. ...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/2/2017 7:21:00 AM
Kevin is a poet friend who encouraged me to begin writing again after 12 year hiatus and another after my husband died but it was only seven years this last time. We do that for each other never met face to facet its been over twenty years.
Date: 9/1/2017 11:15:00 PM
great ode ... glad we ran across your page again then ... oh tell kevin that h p word thing ... ha ha ... hey ... thanks for sharing your thoughts ... once again ...
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Pipping Stars
Date: 9/2/2017 9:42:00 AM
= confusions say huh ...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/2/2017 7:15:00 AM
Timothy you may notice after a while that I have trouble with my words sometimes. so for covering = conversing. Sometimes I surprise my self.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/2/2017 7:05:00 AM
How are you today. I enjoyed covering with you yesterday. I think the answer to the camel conundrum is one mile. Let me know. Thank you for reading and commenting.

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