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Shimmering reflections swim Racing out against the tide Liquid visions streaked with gold Playing chase with the sunlight On the ocean waves they sail 'Til the moon casts shadows down Then it's painted silhouettes Adorned with liquid silver That play games throughout the night Speeding toward the dawn's sunrise To claim their golden trophies And bathe in morning sunshine TLH © 07-27-2012 For: On the Ocean Waves Contest

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Date: 8/9/2012 10:12:00 AM
A well deserved win for you. Congratulations Tanya. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2012 10:11:00 AM
I remember this beauty! So glad to see it on the winner's list. Congrats on your win, Tanya! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/3/2012 8:37:00 AM
Congratulations Tanya xx
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Date: 7/31/2012 10:41:00 AM
Love the visions of silver and gold...beautiful imagery! Love and Blessings :)
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Date: 7/30/2012 4:54:00 PM
This liquid sunshine is very beautiful! I especially like the line, "Adorned with liquid silver" as I can envision that completely in my head with the waters flowing in the dark shadowed silhouettes! I love the images that you paint in this poem my friend! What an awesome poem! Great Work!!
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