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Water Colour Lady

On the shaded side of her morning room, invisible and silent, I watch at the window. Noon, softened by the pane, spotlights the dazzle white of art paper held taut by azure glass pins. An alchemist of sorts, she mixes colours into shades in search of the perfect hue to express a memory tucked neatly away like a piece of mending. A sable brush dips into an old Gerber jar filled with muddied water. Deep brown strokes, the peach tree grows as it once did in her garden, resplendent, wreathed in promise. While the light lasts she sits patiently creating. Rapt in delicacies of tone. A life far apart from mine; now transparent, waning, She drifts across the afternoon into my reverie.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/7/2017 2:18:00 PM
Oh Patricia, this is so lovely. Such a thoughtful vision.
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Date: 10/1/2017 6:34:00 PM
Loved this dreamy piece. Very well crafted. Thank you.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/1/2017 6:57:00 PM
Line you are very kind to me thank you for loving this piece it is one of my favourites.
Date: 10/1/2017 2:47:00 PM
I am in awe of this poem, Pat. Art created in a medium of love.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/1/2017 2:57:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. Patricia
Date: 10/1/2017 12:54:00 PM
John is right you know? You are that good. I like it very much how you weave your images here, I can see her sitting, drifting into your dreams.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/1/2017 2:23:00 PM
My Mom was an artist (so to my dad two sister and a brother) all artists I am the only writer. The poem is about my Mom, after she died I could still picture in her spot painting. Who knows perhaps she was really there. Here art was ver delicate in appearance but held great strength and passion for life.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/1/2017 2:23:00 PM
Thanks for your encouragement and as soon as I get everything in one place and organized I will start trying to e published. I was a few times long ago ( see Woman of the Web).
Date: 10/1/2017 6:53:00 AM
Now there is a NURSE picture reminding me of my wife's picture. and best friend who was a pharmacist. Sun brightly showed on picture she did paint; Came out naturally without a complaint; Always perfect; Could not quit; When seen you knew she was a saint.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/1/2017 10:05:00 AM
Welcome to my home James. It is my grad. picture thought I would drag it out for an airing. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 10/1/2017 4:54:00 AM
You reflective writes are so realistic and poetic.. This is a great write..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/1/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 10/1/2017 2:15:00 AM
Patricia...your poetry is just getting better and better; you should try sending some of your poems to online magazines and the like -- some of your verse deserves to be published! My warmest regards! :) john P.s Time to get some shut-eye now methinks. :)
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John Fleming
Date: 10/1/2017 2:39:00 AM
I have had mine, Patricia...I was referring to your good self - chuckles! :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/1/2017 2:26:00 AM
Thank you John, I guess I should do something with it soon. Thank you for your comment it means a lot to me. Have a good sleep.

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