Water Colour Lady

On the shaded side 
of her morning room, 
invisible and silent, 
I watch  at the window. 
Noon, softened by the pane, 
spotlights 
the dazzle white of art paper 
held taut by azure glass pins. 

An alchemist of sorts, 
she mixes colours into shades 
in search of the perfect hue 
to express a memory 
tucked neatly away 
like a piece of mending. 

A sable brush dips into an old Gerber jar
filled with muddied water. 
Deep brown strokes,  
the peach tree grows as it once did 
in her garden, resplendent, 
wreathed in promise. 
While the light lasts 
she sits patiently creating. 
Rapt in delicacies of tone. 

A life far apart from mine; 
now transparent, waning, 
She drifts across the afternoon 
into my reverie.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Shetley Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Oh Patricia, this is so lovely. Such a thoughtful vision.
Gauthier Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 6:34 PM
Loved this dreamy piece. Very well crafted. Thank you.
Cresswell Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 6:57 PM
Line you are very kind to me thank you for loving this piece it is one of my favourites.
Sergi Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:47 PM
I am in awe of this poem, Pat. Art created in a medium of love.
Cresswell Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:57 PM
Thank you for your kind words. Patricia
White Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 12:54 PM
John is right you know? You are that good. I like it very much how you weave your images here, I can see her sitting, drifting into your dreams.
Cresswell Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:23 PM
My Mom was an artist (so to my dad two sister and a brother) all artists I am the only writer. The poem is about my Mom, after she died I could still picture in her spot painting. Who knows perhaps she was really there. Here art was ver delicate in appearance but held great strength and passion for life.
Cresswell Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:23 PM
Thanks for your encouragement and as soon as I get everything in one place and organized I will start trying to e published. I was a few times long ago ( see Woman of the Web).
Horn Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 6:53 AM
Now there is a NURSE picture reminding me of my wife's picture. and best friend who was a pharmacist. Sun brightly showed on picture she did paint; Came out naturally without a complaint; Always perfect; Could not quit; When seen you knew she was a saint.
Cresswell Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Welcome to my home James. It is my grad. picture thought I would drag it out for an airing. Thank you for reading and commenting.
One Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 4:54 AM
You reflective writes are so realistic and poetic.. This is a great write..
Cresswell Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 10:01 AM
Thank you Silent One.
Fleming Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:15 AM
Patricia...your poetry is just getting better and better; you should try sending some of your poems to online magazines and the like -- some of your verse deserves to be published! My warmest regards! :) john P.s Time to get some shut-eye now methinks. :)
Fleming Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:39 AM
I have had mine, Patricia...I was referring to your good self - chuckles! :)
Cresswell Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:26 AM
Thank you John, I guess I should do something with it soon. Thank you for your comment it means a lot to me. Have a good sleep.
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