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WATCHING YOU

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Below is the poem entitled WATCHING YOU which was written by poet Line Gauthier. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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WATCHING YOU

I watch you
And you don't know it
I see your loneliness
And it touches me
I watch and secretly wish
Things would be otherwise
I'm not indifferent to
The way you can't bring yourself
To come to me and face me
You're ashamed and realize
If you'd be worthy
I'd have you
But for the life of you
You can't get a grip of yourself
So I just continue 
To watch and secretly wish
Things would be otherwise

Submitted for contest LET IT BE sponsored by CATIE LINDSEY on August 14, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 11/14/2017 12:40:00 AM
Nicely written. Loved the last two lines as it ties into how I feel in during my lonely times.
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Date: 11/14/2017 8:07:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Kristina.
Date: 9/23/2017 10:59:00 PM
Wow this is really deep, good format
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Date: 9/24/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. Best wishes.