Watch the Puppets Dance Lyrics To Hallelujah

I watched the magic as the puppets dance
Their fingers moved, I was in a trance
The puppets danced on little strings of wire
From lifeless forms upon the floor
To dancing puppets we adore
The magic as his fingers were on fire 

As though on fire
On strings of wire
As though on fire   
On strings of wire

The master puppeteer did see
He could make you dance with me
Each wire he pulled each heart he lulled, he had  power    
Marionettes as though made of wood
He made us all look so good
We danced to the tune he played over by the hour.....

We looked so good   
Made of wood
We looked so good   
Made of wood

What the puppeteer didn’t see
Was that we were real just like he
Dancing to his merry tune but real flesh and blood  
He pulled his strings to tug at our parts 
By pulling strings he tugged at our hearts
But still he made us dance so good

Not made from wood
But look so good 
Not made from wood
But look so good

We don’t have wire and strings on our knees
But the master puppeteer we please
But  if we don’t want to dance the dance he’s playing for us
If  we don’t want to dance his way
He twist’s and pulls at our  minds that day
We want to leave if and when we want and without the fuss

We don’t want to dance 
We want the chance
We don’t want to dance 
We want the chance.

We cut our strings we will not dance
The puppeteer takes his stance
But of his puppets he has lost control 
 We refuse to dance in  his way 
We have minds of our own we say
So the puppeteer can’t take our very soul

Can’t take our soul
With no control 
Can’t take our soul
With no control

Maybe that’s why we have free will
To choose the way for good or ill
That way we can each  keep the power
So when we’re given the chance to live
The chance to love the chance to give
Take it and that why life never turns soul

We have the power
Life’s not sour 
We have the power
Life’s not sour
~GG~© 18/01/2013

Contest Entry for Franks Contest. Words To the Leonard Cohen Song Hallelujah
My inspiration came from my poem 'Watch the Puppets Dance' I hate to feel manipulated.
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Squyres Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 2:07 PM
I like the depth of each verse...thought provoking. Enjoyed and best of luck in the contest.
Jerden Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Mandy, I liked the way you reworked your other poem to fit the song, in fact I might like it a bit more in this form. On top of that, you did not submit us to an easy parody and an endless chorus of Hallelujahs, great in the original, but somewhat tiresome otherwise. I think you'll do very well in the contest. Good luck.
Horsman Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 6:10 AM
the mystical ability of your mind exemplifies truly your underlining talent.. this is today the world we live in..and you capture the very essence of this...
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 4:44 PM
I love this song Frank chose for his contest and I love how you let it inspire you to come up with this awesome poem, Mandy. You are in tip top form these days creating one like this!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 4:31 AM
Only because I learn from people such as yourself xx
Trifiatis Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 12:33 PM
Are we puppets, is there a puppeteer Who is going this mystery to clear? My Golden Girl, another golden poem. Thank you for..seeing me.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 2:53 AM
H there Demetrios,and yes I think there is a puppet master trying to manipulate us all sometimes, I feel it..it is a pleasure to look on you and not a blank avatar my friend but hubby says i am his golden girl lol xx
Poet Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 8:23 AM
An excellent poem from you Mandy!Best wishes for the contest.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 2:54 AM
Thanks kash xx
Roberts Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 5:43 AM
Great one Mandy, that tune is going over and over in my head, will be glad when i can write mine....Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 2:55 AM
you have done a good job on your pal , just read it xx
O'Leary Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 5:16 AM
Exceptional poem, Mandy... Bravo... xxx Terry
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 2:56 AM
Coming for you Terry I take that as a huge compliment . thank you xx
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