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Watch That Space

Often special is mistaken for eccentric Often genius is mistaken for madness Often greatness is mistaken for pride But in time the veil is removed Dont be superficial in judgement Or too quick to dismiss someone Take a closer look my friend... Could be your in the presence of a king Could be your in the presence of success Could be your in the presence of anointing Nathaniel couldn't believe... That anything good could ever come From nazareth a town of hardships.. Nathaniel realized it's God who uplifteth The creator is not in the business Of creating rejects wake up... Harken to the voice of one in Golgotha He says come and i will relieve you Of your heavy loads.. Come Even so Lord the work is unfinished For that dear one walketh on foot.. Little realising she is of the kingdom That little one hungers knowing not.. She is a child of the MOST HIGH KING CODE 254 Luis K Mselah

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Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 8/28/2015 4:35:00 AM

I love it! The first stanza is a great introduction..

Lewis Nyaga
Date: 8/28/2015 4:46:00 AM

Thanks Njeri for the compliments am glat you love it****blessings

Diane Christian

Date: 8/15/2015 12:15:00 PM

a great write

Lewis Nyaga
Date: 8/18/2015 8:36:00 AM

Thanks Diane **blessings

Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 8/15/2015 3:39:00 AM

I read your religious poem...cannot find the words "uplifteth " and "walketh" in the dictionary.. where is Golgotha?

Lewis Nyaga
Date: 8/18/2015 8:35:00 AM

Thanks sir, once the english language was tonal like most languageS, before it engaged standard forms of spelling, a friend of mine says in scotland its common to hear the old diction.. i stand corrected, as for Golgotha It's there in the Holy land, Golgotha .. its still there you just have to look, ****BLESSINGS