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Washed Away

dirty little thoughts drifting down washing away in streams of rain

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/7/2019 2:28:00 AM

Hilarity at her best, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/7/2019 12:14:00 PM

lol...just was having some bus boredom fun, we had 30 minutes to sit and await dismissal... it was rainy, the bus was dirty from the road salt from snow earlier this week.. hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/6/2019 5:11:00 PM

Phew, only the windscreen lol. You had me there Sandra . Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 6:20:00 PM

lol...yeah this bus was pulled off the road after the snow and road salt the other day... they gave it back today, the windows were a mess, i used the washers but then when it started raining, it made all the dirt stream down off the top of the bus... hugs :)

Running Wolves

Date: 12/6/2019 4:23:00 PM

This made me chuckle... Oh my... I'm bad I'm bad I'm naughty and I'm glad... I mean Uhmmm... nice brevity...cough...cough..

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 6:21:00 PM

lol...well maybe you need to stand in the rain as the vehicle did.... thanks :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/6/2019 3:51:00 PM

Smiling at this one my friend. Hope the rain washes away the dirty little thoughts and leaves nothing but shiny clean thoughts behind...maybe : )

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 6:23:00 PM

lol...well you know, all this snow, and road salt and rain... my muse had to play on the words with what it was seeing... perhaps or my imagination was streaming...or not... hugs

Na Na

Date: 12/6/2019 3:20:00 PM

as we strain our eyes to watch the dirty stains thoughtfully drift away in dirty streams :) thanks for sharing this

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 6:25:00 PM

lol...it was a little bus scribble... nothing exciting about the rain and gray skies ... except the dirt streaming down the windshield... :) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/6/2019 2:41:00 PM

LOL very cute.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 2:43:00 PM

Lol watching the salt washing down the windshield in dirty little streams