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Warrior Poet Zen 1-1

Warrior Poet Zen 1-1 I think of that well-known phrase about the rose and time. We should go beyond that simple act in our downtime. To stop and only smell the rose may be sublime. However, we should endeavor more than a clever rhyme. It is our pleasure and duty to become that rose in our lifetime.

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Date: 8/6/2016 8:24:00 AM
Great mono-rhyme, Hillard - and content, too ... CayCay
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Hillard Sarver
Date: 8/6/2016 9:30:00 AM
Thank you for reading and reviewing this poem. I did not know until just now there is a mono-rhyme category. I will change this piece to that. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 8/5/2016 9:14:00 PM
Perfect! Becoming the rose!
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Hillard Sarver
Date: 8/5/2016 9:25:00 PM
Thank you for reading and reviewing this writing. I am glad you liked it.

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