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Warrior In the Womb

Oh baby! Everyone speaks of a mother's prenatal travails that make you a part of this earth's tales. But, No one talks about what hassle you undergo In your 9-month-long journey when you're all solo. I understand what you are going through inside your mom, my lollipop. I can make out if you're tired or doing a hip-hop. I know that there's darkness around you I know that you're floating in a limited space I know that you're all alone in a strange place I know that you're listening but cannot respond You reach your mom's womb without an escort You feed yourself, you water yourself, you sleep by yourself You turn yourself away from frightening impulses. You guide yourself to your position of comfort You suffer heat when your mom munches on spicy grills You choke for oxygen if your mom neglects fluids. You shiver in fear when thunder-like noises bang your mom's ears You cry in silence and your mom never knows that. While your mom gets help to attune to her changing body, You grow by yourself learning to adjust and adapt. While a bunch of people help your mom in delivering you out, you unravel your own ways to emerge out of life's narrow channel. What an enchanting little learner you are! What a great selfstanding human you are! You stand as a lone warrior for nine months And deserve huge respect and applause I, your mother, promise to tap into your implicit language Above all, I salute you for your unwavering courage.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 6/11/2022 8:45:00 AM
I can fully understand how this got POTD the most unreal, perfect, awesome, unbelievable poem that any mother could ever read kudos for your POTD and POTW Swetha and kudos for your oh so fertile imagination. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 5/8/2022 6:29:00 AM
Quite cute, Rico. Congrats on the POTD!
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Date: 5/6/2022 12:26:00 PM
Swetha, it is SO easy to see why this poem was deemed POTW. It is truly exceptional--vividly descriptive, moving, showing reverence for LIFE! Janice
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Date: 5/5/2022 3:39:00 PM
Revisiting to congratulate you on POTW honour. This is well-deserved. Your poem is unique in its depth and profundity. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 5/3/2022 10:41:00 PM
Metaphorically, we too are in the womb of existence, waiting to be born! Congrats on POTW, Swetha
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Date: 5/3/2022 6:26:00 AM
An amazing poem, Dear Swetha! POTD is well-deserved! The way you have presented the whole experience from the baby’s point of view - outstanding indeed! Thank you for visiting my page - it’s definitely a delight! Love and warm wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 5/2/2022 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your POEM OF THE WEEK win. An amazing/creative write. Love It. Have a great/blessed day..............
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Date: 5/2/2022 12:48:00 AM
This is outstanding Swetha. I am so pleased to see it honored with Poem of the Week. Congratulations my friend. I can relate being the mother of four. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/1/2022 9:35:00 PM
Svetha, wonderful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor ~Constance
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Date: 5/1/2022 6:15:00 PM
I have chills while reading your words. Oh, my ! The journey an unborn child takes is incredible. I completely agree with everything you have stated here. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Swetha, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Date: 5/1/2022 4:13:00 PM
Outstanding! What a fabulous tribute to brave, unborn children. I appreciate the perspective of the unborn child. I wish more mothers-to-be read this poem so they could understand perhaps a bit better. A woman seeking an abortion needs to read your poem. Well done! Thank you!
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Date: 5/1/2022 8:35:00 AM
Excellent writing Swetha, a well deserved honour of POTW. Tom
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Date: 5/1/2022 7:04:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTW, Swetha. Enjoy your day and the week.
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Date: 5/1/2022 6:33:00 AM
What a beautiful perspective, Swetha! A wonder provoking poem so worthy of POTW honours:) congratulations:)
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Date: 4/29/2022 6:47:00 AM
Swetha, this poem is amazing in every respect--moving, thoughtful, and vividly descriptive--a masterpiece! Janice
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Date: 4/29/2022 3:03:00 AM
A very evocative write! A true warrior well-defined.
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Date: 4/28/2022 10:40:00 PM
Excellent poetry, a journey and so much emotion. Also a wonderful learning curve.
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Date: 4/28/2022 6:18:00 PM
Super WoW Swetha! Love this note to your unborn baby. A must save fave for me. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/28/2022 3:27:00 PM
Swetha, Such A wonderful look into the emotional experiences of the innocent fetus. Masterfully executed. This is one of my faves. Thanks for your comment and visit to my page.
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Date: 4/28/2022 1:29:00 PM
Only a mother could ever describe the agony and triumph of birth. Only the bearer of the unborn could ever witness the coming of a new life. A fave for me, dearest Swetha. The Spartans, the bravest of ancient Greek warriors, used to say that they preferred to face death on the battlefield twice than to face one birth! Blessings!
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Date: 4/28/2022 10:04:00 AM
Golly, a beautiful poem and a FAVE. Thank you this outstanding contribution to The Soup! Pangie
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Date: 4/28/2022 2:40:00 AM
This side of the story we never even care to know or bother to think ! You have seen things from the baby's perspective and what you have reflected here makes so much sense ! He/ she is indeed a lone warrior in the womb ! Well done, Swetha
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Date: 4/27/2022 11:16:00 AM
WOW! A phenomenal insight into the unborn baby's thoughts and mind. Superbly done.
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Date: 4/26/2022 10:15:00 PM
A great tribute to womanhood. I cannot accept abortions. It deprives you of parental bliss.
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Date: 4/26/2022 7:17:00 PM
Most fascinating thing I've ever seen, when my firstborn started probing my wife's womb. I'd see a hand sticking out and everything... There's a reason a woman get pregnant instead of men: Women deliver! Keep smiling, Swetha! :) gw
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