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Warm Rays

The suns warm rays shone Down as the wind blew gently Rustling through the trees.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 6/6/2015 10:09:00 AM
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Nice haiku.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/14/2014 11:11:00 PM
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a pretty autumn picture.
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 9/5/2014 2:35:00 PM
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This is wonderful Talicia, very warm... LINDA
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James Fraser
Date: 9/1/2014 3:20:00 PM
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Lovely images Talicia, and don't worry about getting anything wrong. In life, everyday's a school day. Keep writing and we'll keep reading and assist you, James :)
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Mario De Paz
Date: 9/1/2014 6:12:00 AM
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Although not perfectly composed in syllables, these simple words are very expressive indeed
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Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 9/1/2014 6:17:00 AM
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Thanks. :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/31/2014 8:30:00 PM
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Congrats on this lovely haiku, my dear! I'm glad you jumped right in and joined a contest. :) Thanks for your visit and welcome to the SOUP! :)
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Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/31/2014 8:32:00 PM
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Thanks for the nice comment
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 8/23/2014 4:17:00 PM
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Nice haiku. congratulations on your rating. Love, Joyce
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Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/24/2014 1:55:00 AM
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Thanks
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2014 6:39:00 AM
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- Talicia, congratulations on your lovely winning poem in the contest "Seasonal Bliss" Sponsored by: Regina Riddle. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/24/2014 1:55:00 AM
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Thank you
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Robin Davis
Date: 8/15/2014 9:00:00 AM
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Talicia A nice write full of warmth and serenity. Thank you for the nice comment on my Super Powers poem.
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Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/16/2014 7:23:00 PM
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To see and comment on our poems
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Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/16/2014 7:22:00 PM
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Thanks and it's what poetrysoup was made for
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 8/12/2014 7:55:00 AM
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The middle line requires seven syllables, Talicia
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Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/12/2014 7:58:00 AM
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Oh...thanks

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