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Warm Rays

The suns warm rays shone Down as the wind blew gently Rustling through the trees.

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Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 6/6/2015 10:09:00 AM

Nice haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2014 11:11:00 PM

a pretty autumn picture.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2014 2:35:00 PM

This is wonderful Talicia, very warm... LINDA

James Fraser

Date: 9/1/2014 3:20:00 PM

Lovely images Talicia, and don't worry about getting anything wrong. In life, everyday's a school day. Keep writing and we'll keep reading and assist you, James :)

Mario De Paz

Date: 9/1/2014 6:12:00 AM

Although not perfectly composed in syllables, these simple words are very expressive indeed

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 9/1/2014 6:17:00 AM

Thanks. :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/31/2014 8:30:00 PM

Congrats on this lovely haiku, my dear! I'm glad you jumped right in and joined a contest. :) Thanks for your visit and welcome to the SOUP! :)

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/31/2014 8:32:00 PM

Thanks for the nice comment

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/23/2014 4:17:00 PM

Nice haiku. congratulations on your rating. Love, Joyce

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/24/2014 1:55:00 AM

Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2014 6:39:00 AM

- Talicia, congratulations on your lovely winning poem in the contest "Seasonal Bliss" Sponsored by: Regina Riddle. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/24/2014 1:55:00 AM

Thank you

Robin Davis

Date: 8/15/2014 9:00:00 AM

Talicia A nice write full of warmth and serenity. Thank you for the nice comment on my Super Powers poem.

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/16/2014 7:23:00 PM

To see and comment on our poems

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/16/2014 7:22:00 PM

Thanks and it's what poetrysoup was made for

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/12/2014 7:55:00 AM

The middle line requires seven syllables, Talicia

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/12/2014 7:58:00 AM

Oh...thanks