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Warm Rays

The suns warm rays shone 
Down as the wind blew gently
Rustling through the trees.

Copyright © Secrets Inyoureyes | Year Posted 2014

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June 6, 2015 at 10:09 AM

Nice haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

September 14, 2014 at 11:11 PM

a pretty autumn picture.

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2014 at 2:35 PM

This is wonderful Talicia, very warm... LINDA

September 1, 2014 at 3:20 PM

Lovely images Talicia, and don't worry about getting anything wrong. In life, everyday's a school day. Keep writing and we'll keep reading and assist you, James :)

September 1, 2014 at 6:12 AM

Although not perfectly composed in syllables, these simple words are very expressive indeed

Secrets Inyoureyes

September 1, 2014 at 6:17 AM

Thanks. :)

Eileen Manassian

August 31, 2014 at 8:30 PM

Congrats on this lovely haiku, my dear! I'm glad you jumped right in and joined a contest. :) Thanks for your visit and welcome to the SOUP! :)

Secrets Inyoureyes

August 31, 2014 at 8:32 PM

Thanks for the nice comment

August 23, 2014 at 4:17 PM

Nice haiku. congratulations on your rating. Love, Joyce

Secrets Inyoureyes

August 24, 2014 at 1:55 AM

Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 23, 2014 at 6:39 AM

- Talicia, congratulations on your lovely winning poem in the contest "Seasonal Bliss" Sponsored by: Regina Riddle. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Secrets Inyoureyes

August 24, 2014 at 1:55 AM

Thank you

August 15, 2014 at 9:00 AM

Talicia A nice write full of warmth and serenity. Thank you for the nice comment on my Super Powers poem.

Secrets Inyoureyes

August 16, 2014 at 7:23 PM

To see and comment on our poems

Secrets Inyoureyes

August 16, 2014 at 7:22 PM

Thanks and it's what poetrysoup was made for

August 12, 2014 at 7:55 AM

The middle line requires seven syllables, Talicia

Secrets Inyoureyes

August 12, 2014 at 7:58 AM

Oh...thanks

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