Warm Enough

An icy breeze runs briskly through my branches.
Branches once adorned with luscious green needles
Now charcoal black and broken, growth given no chances.
I shudder and reminisce when my branches stood like steeples, 
When I thrived in a coat of green, not a barren limb.
I was warm enough on my own, then. 

Mighty eagles found solace in my awning,
I was such a thing of beauty, I was desirable. 
Little children climbed upon me and found my presence calming
They’d rest their heads against me, always quite adorable. 
Why couldn’t  have I been content with dependable eagles?
Why did I find it exciting, the danger and warmth of fire?

How it glowed, like a beacon, drawing my attention.
Sister trees cried of how it burned, how it killed. 
I was ignorantly mesmerized, they watched with apprehension. 
With its overwhelming warmth I longed to be filled.
I should have listened to my experienced kin.
I was warm enough on my own, then. 

I called out to its embers, in my rich coat of green.
Soon enough, into my unscathed grove it came.
I assumed it was my virtue that the fire had seen,
But, truth be told, it only sought to set ablaze my frame.
The warmth was thrilling, at first touch
It held me so gently, I could hardly feel its clutch.

Then, spreading through my branches and up my back,
I felt the first twinges of pain, confusion, fear.
Flames distorted my coat from green to brown to black. 
To my horror it fell to my feet. I wished that from me the fire would veer. 
It burned me, scorched me, defiled me. 
I loathed the way I had longed for it to touch me. 

Cold, barren, and ashamed I stood.
My frame, hanging, broken and abused.
It's humiliating that only then I understood,
Discontent with what you have will only leave you bruised. 
Now I must sit, blackened in my glen
Remembering how warm I was, back then.
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Anaya Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 5:19 PM
A trembling personification of twinges of pain, confusion, fear! Congratulations on First Place! I Am Anaya
Chunn Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 3:24 PM
This is a wonderful write. You captured a horrific occasion and illuminated the mixed feelings of such an event. Beautiful!
La France Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Emily, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, well done !
Agustin Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 7:26 PM
Wow! Your first posted poem is a winner . God bless you.
Caliri Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:17 PM
Nice job, Emily, on first place in my contest!!! Sorry it took so long to judge. This piece blew me away, I loved the POV of the tree. Original and whimsical!
Agustin Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 4:11 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
John Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 2:38 AM
From warmth to bruise, coldness, barrenness. Lovely images. Thank you for a wonderful poem, Emily.
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