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War of Independence

King George was fast running out of money
Tried to squeeze more out of the colony
Thirteen states said no
Told George where to go
Saying "thank you, but we'll run our own country"...

Paul Revere warned the British are coming
The yanks said "that's ok we ain't moving" 
Many heroic acts abound
The militias stood their ground 
And soon had the Brit Redcoats a-running... 


Written 3rd July 2021

Happy Independence Day. 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 5:33 PM
Cleverly composed ! Everywhere Independence is got through war and violence . Love the image ....
Cunningham Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 1:05 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 6:16 PM
Love the limerick and the pic! Great!
Cunningham Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Thank you very much Kim, im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 6:24 AM
I like the humor of this one and the retelling of the fighting spirit of the people of the USA. I have been taught that the fight for independence was about the fact that we were being taxed but not allowed to have representation in the government over in England. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 6:38 AM
Thank you very much Sara, King George wanted more money to fight wars and thought the colonies would be a soft touch but how wrong he was. Tom
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 1:51 PM
- Bet on Robin Hood ... he knows how this should be arranged, Tom :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Lol, Robin had the right idea, now they rob the poor to feed the rich. Tom
Rose  Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 12:50 PM
I think you should run for Presi, you bring out the light side of life, and I like that, they are much to serious in the Cabinet these days :)
Cunningham Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Thanks Rose, my first job would be to put humour into politics lol. Tom
Radice Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 12:18 PM
Very cleverly composed Tom. A great read. I think I've mentioned this before on another piece by your good self.. namely that there are major moments in our history that we should not be too proud of. Cheers - Gary.
Cunningham Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 4:56 AM
Belated thanks Gary, only just noticed I hadn't replied. My bad. Hope your keeping well. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Tom I love your knowledge of history and it is sad that Britain took so many countries and colonized them, worldwide. Mind you, so did the French, the Dutch,and the German and not forgetting the Portuguese. I love your pic. Blessings, Jennifer
Cunningham Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 11:59 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, im happy that you enjoyed it. Like all empires they come and go. I hope you are okay now. Tom
Y. Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 10:03 AM
Hi Tom, I don't know-how missed this; I enjoyed the read—happy belated independence day. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Thank you very much Alexis, glad you enjoyed it, sadly we don't party 4th July as the British lost, serves them right though for being greedy lol. Tom
Hargreaves Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Thanks for this Tom. It makes me reflect on the way the British tried to dominate everywhere. They played predator; took their prey. Tony.
Cunningham Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 4:59 AM
Thank you very much Terry, like all empires the further they go out the thinner they get, and the cost involved, the Falklands comes to mind, it costs millions to defend it, money better spent at home in my opinion. Enjoy your weekend Tom
Faulkner Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 9:03 PM
And now we all pay our taxes with no complaints :) Hope you're having a good summer, Tom~
Cunningham Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 12:55 AM
Lol you're right there Michelle, who ever is in charge wants their cut. Hope you had a lovely july 4th. Im away in Wales until the weekend, no WiFi where I am, using hot spots when i can. Tom.
Daniel Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 9:06 PM
Brilliant limericks on independence, Tom:) hope you enjoyed your 4th of July celebrations:)
Cunningham Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 12:31 AM
Thank you very much Jo, sadly its not celebrated in the UK, poor losers I say lol. Hope you had a lovely day. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 2:15 PM
awesome, Tom!! happy holiday time!!
Cunningham Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 12:29 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, glad you enjoyed them, hope you had a great celebration. Tom
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Your Limericks are of unique depth and genuine wittiness ! You craft your words with a remarkable talent and artistry dipped into an amazing sense of humour.. so much pleased reading your beauties, Tom.. Happy Independence Day to you and to all Americans.. stay safe.. My deepest regards and blessings.
Cunningham Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 11:20 PM
Thank you very much Besma, Im happy that you enjoyed the humour. I hope you are keeping well. Tom
Leffanta Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 11:41 AM
The Tea Tax gets the credit, but it was the tobacco legislation that ruined Virginia plantations which Washington, Jefferson, et al found revolting. Well done, Tom, but we would be a better country if you had kept those blood-thirsty pilgrims!
Cunningham Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Lol, we like to share,glad you enjoyed it, happy independence day. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 6:52 AM
The madness of King George, you tell it so well Tom. What the Brits did, it’s the pits. An amusing write for Independence Day… Belle
Cunningham Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 7:04 AM
Thank you very much Belle, im glad you enjoyed the humour. Tom
Ball Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 6:29 AM
Love this Tom. A fave for me. God Bless, JB
Cunningham Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 6:38 AM
Thank you very much Judy, im happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks too for the fave. Tom
Gentile Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 4:44 AM
A perfect Independence Day write Tom. Very amusing and well done and fun to read this 4th of July ! Happy Sunday !!
Cunningham Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 5:48 AM
Thank you very much Mike, im pleased that you enjoyed the humour. Happy Independence Day. Tom
Logan Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 3:07 AM
Your talent for story telling and humor abound in your quip, Tom. Love the picture, too.
Cunningham Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 3:12 AM
Thank you very much Jenna, im glad you enjoyed it. Enjoy your day. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 2:25 AM
I sense part two of this delicious appetizer is coming, my friend, Tom. Blessings!
Cunningham Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 2:37 AM
Thank you Demetrios, glad you enjoyed it, watch this space. Tom
Skelly Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 2:14 AM
For some reason I am reminded of Punch Magazine, long since defunct I know. Love your humourous take it bought a smile to my face....Delice
Cunningham Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 2:36 AM
Thank you very much Delice, im happy that you enjoyed it. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 12:33 AM
Good one! United we can drive all enemies away. Good tribute. Enjoy your weekend
Cunningham Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 12:46 AM
Thank you very much Rama, and you too. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:01 PM
It is always the god of money that ruins the status quo. Lovely limerick.
Cunningham Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 11:38 PM
You're right Victor, the colonies were already taxed to the hilt and England wanted more, Tom
Laurie Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 9:26 PM
Hello Tom … back then, not often did Britain find themselves suffering a loss in war, but the Americans were too united on this occasion - thanks Tom - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 11:36 PM
Thank you Lindsay, They were outnumbered too but still sent the redcoats packing. Tom
Wolf Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 8:22 PM
That about sizes it up, Tom. It's usually about money (or oil). ~ gw
Cunningham Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 11:33 PM
Thank you Gershon, you're so right, if George hadn't pressed for more taxes the war might have never been and you'd be flying the union jack. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Poet Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 4:40 PM
While your other limericks typically include a lot of deep symbolism, this one isn't any different. I wish you the best in all your endeavors, and may your day be filled with many beautiful moments. I believe that everyone is born free with all my heart, and every nation that fought for its freedom deserves to be free.
Cunningham Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 11:31 PM
Thank you very much Lasaad, I agree with you, no one should have to fight for what is rightfully theirs to start with. Tom
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