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Want Vs Need

Last Christmas little Anne dashed to the tree. The gift she most desired, would she see? Her folks were poor, but Santa’s not! The coat she got—she NEEDED, but Santa’d not heeded her one-plea letter for the better present, a little doll-- one that drinks, wets, and cries “MAMA!” Anne thinks When will this grand prize be mine, as I have planned? while she SAYS, “I love my coat.” She’s just too young to understand why some get a coat; some, a sail boat; others, a sweet doll on which they can dote.
October 26, 2018, entered in Julia Ward's A Poem of Reaction Contest entered in Brian Strand's November contest November 5, 2018

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Date: 11/6/2018 6:08:00 PM
Hello Janice yes want and need. Two different meanings. The little girl was better off with the coat she needed. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/6/2018 7:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Darlene! Janice
Date: 10/29/2018 2:09:00 PM
A lovely Etheree Janice...congrats on your excellent win...love & light...^WW^
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/29/2018 3:33:00 PM
Winged Warrior, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 10/28/2018 2:31:00 PM
I am so happy to see this wonderful poem win First Placement Janice. You deserved it! You know I faved it! Congratulations! xxoo : )
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/28/2018 2:44:00 PM
Connie, thank you for these kind words! Janice
Date: 10/28/2018 9:02:00 AM
Back with much deserved congrats for your gold medal win with your emotional poem, Janice. Love the form, love the message.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/28/2018 2:11:00 PM
THANK YOU so much, Line! Janice
Date: 10/28/2018 12:48:00 AM
Exactly... Dolls are important for fostering the desire to become mothers one day. I enjoyed your poem enough to award it first place in my contest, so congratulations, Janice.
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Julia Ward
Date: 10/28/2018 11:10:00 AM
I'm so pleased, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/28/2018 6:34:00 AM
Julia, I am THRILLED. Thank you so much. I'm grinning from ear to ear! Janice
Date: 10/27/2018 2:35:00 PM
I used to be that child Janice. I only wish my mother had explained how poor we were. Children can handle the truth much better than pretence. This is a beautiful write that understands the yearning heart of a child. Excellent and a fave! : )
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/27/2018 4:07:00 PM
Connie, I am so TOUCHED by your comment. Parents sometimes presume too much about what children REALLY understand. THANKS! Janice
Date: 10/26/2018 3:58:00 PM
What an excellent double etheree, this used to be one of my fave forms.... You did it very very well...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/26/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thank you SO MUCH, S.O.! Janice
Date: 10/26/2018 12:45:00 PM
Love your presentation, Janice. Beautiful poem.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/26/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 10/26/2018 11:42:00 AM
Awesome lesson in your poem..well crafted as always..Best for a win, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/26/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 10/26/2018 10:49:00 AM
Beautifully crafted ;)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/26/2018 11:10:00 AM
THANK YOU so much! Janice

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