Waltz On

If the river wends its way on a path so very long, and it can't make up its mind, just meandering along, then a monsoon from the west blows the rains in hard and strong, and the water's backing up till it's flatly flowing wrong, and makes a lake where none was there to form a billabong… When morning's interrupted by the kookaburra's song, which echoes oh so merrily, like laughter from the throng, as the rainbow eucalyptus flaunts its dazzling sarong, and your cellphone has no bars, do you know where you belong?
A Kookaburra laughing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7jW7A2glZbk
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Rhymer Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 12:51 PM
Good day mate!Time to throw a shrimp on the barbie
Wolf Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 7:05 PM
How about if the bars have no cellphones?! ~ Kookaburra live in the old gum tree...
Kyser Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 4:38 AM
A lot of places could do without cellphones, eh, mate?
Anaya Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 4:21 PM
Imagery of a place exotic and strange to me, that I would love to see. Whippoorwill bird also has a song "My Blue Heaven" You've made me a jolly swagwoman! Splendidly unfurled Jeff!
Kyser Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 6:00 PM
Ha, thanks, Anaya. If you're unfamiliar with the kookaburra's song, look one up on youtube, amazing!
Hankins Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 8:25 AM
A most engaging monorhyme, Jeff. Interesting Australian touches.
Kyser Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 8:50 AM
I'm kind of monochromatic lately, thanks :-)
Fowler Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Very clever Jeff. I enjoyed reading this several times! Linda
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