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Last Dance

Oh be my heart for me when it stops beating, my lungs to breathe thin air still far too chill, my feet to dance the world while I'm still living as they still want but now no longer will. Be my two arms and tug me in our tango— flamenco palo, wrap your wings around my lithe frame, chant me our concluding canto with all the strength in us you somehow found. Oh sit with me and reminisce those dances— pure, perfect passion, smile and lift your head, observe illuminated skies above you... We meet again, we'll waltz soon in Atlantis. With you here, there is nothing that I dread, do not be sad, this is not an adieu. *** May 15, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/27/2017 1:22:00 AM

A very beautiful sonnet Darren!

Paul Dandrea

Date: 5/17/2017 12:23:00 AM

This one surprised and caught me in its movement and something sad at the end. Maybe poetry is making me more human bit by bit.

Darren White
Date: 5/17/2017 12:53:00 AM

Poetry makes me more human, that's for sure! It is sad I agree :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/16/2017 12:08:00 PM

Gorgeous.

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 12:11:00 PM

Thanks ma mo :)

Funom Makama

Date: 5/16/2017 10:08:00 AM

This is brilliant and beautiful. Leaving your pages for a while equates throwing away refined Gold into the pacific. Now I know why my hands itch when away from your pages. Top notch mental exhibition and a powerful seven. Its been a while wonderful friend!

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 10:32:00 AM

Oh Funom, such wonderful words my friend, thank you! I am glad to see you, it has most certainly been a while. And now it's time for me to start reading your poems :)

Precioso Tano

Date: 5/16/2017 2:55:00 AM

What a lovely song to dance with!

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 3:24:00 AM

Thank you :)

John Herlihy

Date: 5/16/2017 12:54:00 AM

One feels taken in hand and danced around in reading this poem. Charming. John

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 1:18:00 AM

Thank you :) I chose the music with care!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2017 6:05:00 PM

Darren this is utterly beautiful. I LOVE this. And the dance metaphors, etc. a big SEVEN on this one, Darren.

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 12:21:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, now I feel proud :)

Elissa Quigley

Date: 5/15/2017 3:42:00 PM

This made me cry alittle...okay alot. The dance doesnt have to end, let the dance go on. Maybe not outside, but let your heart leap, and your pulse race. Let your heart hold the dance, so your soul has a partner to waltz with

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 12:23:00 AM

Hi Elissa :) Yes, the dance will go on, in soul and in spirit, always, thank you my friend.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/15/2017 12:50:00 PM

I'm moving away from the computer Darren but consider it done. I can see the dance and I can hear the songs. Most of all I can see the glory and all the fun. -- smiling back -- Later Penquin

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/15/2017 12:34:00 PM

Dear Darren. How could I not. I love them and you too. You never fail to hit the poetic mark and touch. It is truly evident in your work. -- smile -- Now behave or I'll have to get the movie Happy Feet and Happy Feet Two out. Don't make me go there.... (lol)

Darren White
Date: 5/15/2017 12:44:00 PM

Happy Feet :) Me, as dancing penguin wouldn't mind :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/15/2017 12:08:00 PM

Hello Penguin. Your expression your artistry your presentation and more always bring out emotion in me. This entry is no exception. Your work is beautiful and so top level. You deliver to your readers the total package. You Penguin are the total package. Allow me to say may your lungs breathe. They have to because you take our breath away with your work. Honestly. Peace Health and Happiness Always.

Darren White
Date: 5/15/2017 12:26:00 PM

I am glad the blue bird loves the penguin. And I am serious Lisa, I am so happy you love my poems. Thank you, thank you! <3

Phillip Garcia

Date: 5/15/2017 10:58:00 AM

A sonnet with great alliteration AND a reference to Atlantis? Be still my heart, what a grand idea! :) Great sonnet, for reals. It has a sneaky hypnotic rhythm to it that draws you in and won't let go. A+, young man.

Darren White
Date: 5/15/2017 11:11:00 AM

Love the alliteration Yay :) Thanks for the A+ and the love for Atlantis !

Frederic Parker

Date: 5/15/2017 9:24:00 AM

The quiet sadness in this poem grows louder with each line read, with a breath of hope in the last line..a really nice poem

Darren White
Date: 5/15/2017 9:31:00 AM

Thank you Frederic, I really appreciate that because I see you as THE sonnet writer here.

Probir Gupta

Date: 5/15/2017 9:09:00 AM

A nice sonnet, Darren, from the hollow sky ...Never say goodbye ...

Darren White
Date: 5/15/2017 9:30:00 AM

Never goodbye, no... Thank you :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/15/2017 9:09:00 AM

This is a beautiful write, Darren. :)

Darren White
Date: 5/15/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Heidi, I am glad you like it.

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/15/2017 7:50:00 AM

This poem is sad to me, Darren. Nice sonnet though:)

Darren White
Date: 5/15/2017 8:07:00 AM

Yes, it is sad, I will not deny that Daniël. But I am glad you liked the poem :)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/15/2017 7:32:00 AM

A melancholy feel which accentuates the beauty of your poem...be well my friend

Darren White
Date: 5/15/2017 7:40:00 AM

Thanks Tim, glad you love the poem :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/15/2017 7:24:00 AM

Much emotion in the first verse, much wanting expressed in a tango then you take us on an ethereal waltz with a mysterious last line. Well done, friend.

Darren White
Date: 5/15/2017 7:30:00 AM

Always dancing Kim :) Thank you my friend.

Chris Green

Date: 5/15/2017 7:21:00 AM

Sadly beautiful my friend. Your words dance in slow methodical movements that touch the heart and the soul. Keep dancing my friend, keep dancing.

Darren White
Date: 5/15/2017 7:29:00 AM

Thanks Chris, I am happy you love the poem, even though it's a sad one. It doesn't mean I am sad, luckily I am not. Sick but not sad :) Thank you.