Walls Make Bad Neighbours

Walls Make Bad Neighbours

‘All in all we are just bricks in the wall’ deconstructed by Pink Floyd
                              when they called for a truly kind compassionate reflective society and

                                                        ~ Education ~

Of John Lennon we may think that he was ‘a dreamer but not the only 
                                 one’ to 'give peace a chance' while discounting violent revolution in

                                                         ~ Resistance ~

Wolf Biermann sees his father’s grave every time smoke ascends from
                                  some industrious chimneys of so many concentrated crimes against

                                                         ~ Humanity ~

‘What will the neighbours say’ goes to my parent’s generation when 
                            they continued to live the secret of why they colluded with fascism and

                                                         ~ Genocide ~

Karl Marx clearly saw the alienation of humanity and that ‘knowledge without
                                            action’ was a false shallow unfinished philosophy and empty

                                                          ~ Promise ~

The Scorpions called for ‘winds of change’ but are they a-changing here and today
                                 while most of us sit on fat gluttonous bums or size zero buttocks of

                                                           ~ Delusion ~

The fake golden staircase leads from Zeppelin to Zeppelin with hot air
                               between the sheets of so called progress on eves wasted droned into

                                                           ~ Oblivion ~

Nena’s ‘red balloons’ popped out of nowhere but into nothing’s blip of
               conscience forsaken Nirvana and waning sound bites of candles extinguished by
  
                                                         ~ Destruction ~

If we want to surpass the walls of our prisons we might want to consider
                   removing that one brick at a time that barricades and constricts our quest for 
                            
                                                         ~ Liberation ~

The freedom of justice and the freedom from the walls in our minds as our
                                 children will lay cries of despair at our door with only us to blame in

                                                           ~ Shame ~

We are the guardians of posterity but which side of the fence are we 
                                  sitting on in our greed racism intolerance xenophobia and egotistic

                                                            ~ Denial ~

When we sow winds we will reap storms and the flood gates will open
                        yet transformation makes better neighbours and better companions than  

                                                             ~ Walls ~ 


 

15th November 2016                                                        


                          





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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/14/2021 2:13:00 PM
WoW--you summed up humanity pretty perfectly! And will we ever change--that's the question. Great poem!
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Date: 7/8/2019 1:49:00 PM
holykomoly...wowza...you sure you ain't on coffee or something...nice write
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Date: 5/31/2019 9:22:00 AM
Brilliant writing, my friend. Excellent structure, which compliments the intent of your piece. Five-star poem, IMO!
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Date: 5/31/2019 6:23:00 AM
This is poem full of philosophy. Great. Keep on think in such novel ways humanity will get a lot from you.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/9/2019 5:00:00 AM
Only reading this now. Thank you for your comment and praise. I might be 'preaching' to the converted, but (I worked as a physician) first do no harm. Kind wishes to you, Kai
Date: 5/31/2019 5:43:00 AM
I like this poem. maybe the poem likes me. very cool. feel free to see/comment on mine on poetrysoup. sincerely, Daniel schack.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/31/2019 11:14:00 AM
Good fit then. Thank you. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 5/30/2019 12:06:00 PM
I am very impressed with this one, my friend!!! Excellent composition... cheers, Happy Jack!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/31/2019 11:12:00 AM
Thank you Jack. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 10/1/2017 5:04:00 PM
WoW ! Love it :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/31/2019 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Debbie. I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/31/2019 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Debbie. I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 11/15/2016 8:45:00 AM
Very deep and profound. Much to reflect on. Great writing, Kai. Lainey
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/15/2016 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Elaine. I appreciate that. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 11/15/2016 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Probir. Just trying to make some sense of the world...
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Date: 11/15/2016 5:37:00 AM
Very enlightening ... Read with interest and joy ...
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