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Wallflower

In the rain I stand pressed against your window glass, warm and cold the liquid runs where my tears mingle. Do you see me here longing for the warmth, the embers stirred to flame lighting the room where she sits beside you, appearing self possessed and free, a fake-smiling mannequin of me? Why can't I turn away, walk out of this self barred prison into another, happier landscape? Weeping wallflower, trembling, naked soul . . . the jagged flashes push me closer, bright hot lightening bolts of fear flattening me against your wall. Copyright, September 9, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 9/12/2014 9:32:00 PM
Awesome write Faye! Love that line a fake smiling mannequin of me,,that's how we really feel in rejection, congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/12/2014 10:45:00 AM
Faye, Congratulations, with your awesome rejection poem.... LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/12/2014 10:09:00 AM
Wow.......this intensely sad, and poem of rejection is as if watching a melancholy music video....can see the rain outside, and the tears falling against the glass! Well done, Faye !
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Date: 9/12/2014 10:04:00 AM
Nice imagery, congrats on the win, Faye
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Date: 9/12/2014 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on this beautiful poem Faye. As always you express yourself with such beauty.
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Date: 9/12/2014 3:48:00 AM
Every line is a gem but: 'Weeping wallflower, trembling, naked soul'? WOW...Congrats dear lady! - Tim
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Date: 9/11/2014 11:14:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful poem - Love and prayers and thank you so much for entering the contest. God bless you, Gina
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