Wallflower

In the rain I stand
pressed against your window glass,
warm and cold the liquid runs
where my tears mingle.
Do you see me here
longing for the warmth,
the embers stirred to flame
lighting the room
where she sits beside you,
appearing self possessed and free,
a fake-smiling  mannequin of me?

Why can't I turn away,
walk out of this self barred prison
into another, happier landscape?
Weeping wallflower, trembling, naked soul . . .
the jagged flashes push me closer,
bright hot lightening bolts of fear
flattening me against your wall.

Copyright, September 9, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A. Sharma Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Awesome write Faye! Love that line a fake smiling mannequin of me,,that's how we really feel in rejection, congrats on big win!
A   Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 10:45 AM
Faye, Congratulations, with your awesome rejection poem.... LOVE LINDA
Richards Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Wow.......this intensely sad, and poem of rejection is as if watching a melancholy music video....can see the rain outside, and the tears falling against the glass! Well done, Faye !
Mehta Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 10:04 AM
Nice imagery, congrats on the win, Faye
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on this beautiful poem Faye. As always you express yourself with such beauty.
Ryerson Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 3:48 AM
Every line is a gem but: 'Weeping wallflower, trembling, naked soul'? WOW...Congrats dear lady! - Tim
Mcintosh Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 11:14 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful poem - Love and prayers and thank you so much for entering the contest. God bless you, Gina
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