Wall In the Woods

Wall in the Woods

A solitary pensive woodland canticle
Wanders through summer’s souvenirs,
A gypsy quilt of green transformed to crimson flame,
And prophesies of empty paeans swiftly riding
Through a meandering row of barren arms
Keeping silent watch at last light over crumbling lines,
Smooth river stones staggering
Beneath the jealous hand of gravity’s lament
For lost time and the skillful composer’s design,
As seasons fled to forget the wall’s divide;
One epoch stands at the trellis barrier of a foregone age
On a footpath two worlds collide - atonal echoes escaping
In a vision for once neat orchard rows overgrown
Separated from a scattered copse of Queen Anne’s Lace;
Seeking signs of clarity through slinking shadows
From the clear eyed composition, standing mid gracious ferns,
Barred from crossing – stepping over the seal of time signatures -
Yet led to find a rusted gate -a scrolling key -
To unlock a welcoming transition – melded vision transposition
A secret weald of melancholy song walking by a wall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Callus Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 1:29 PM
This is excellent, Sam, and pointing out phrases which caught my eye would be a disservice to this poem! Congratulations on a deserved podium finish. Regards // pau
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 4:18 PM
So grateful for your visit and your congratulations, Paul. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment with your poet's always discerning eye. Such a delight to share the virtual podium with you. Hope you have some time to take a walk in the woods to find the treasures waiting to be found! Sending you a harvest of best wishes.
Watt Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 2:33 PM
A 2nd with Craig is a big honor, my friend! "Beneath the jealous hand of gravity’s lament" may just be my favorite of many pleasing lines, but you know me, I always love your musicality shining through: canticle, skillful composer, composition, time signatures, transposition (a scrolling key?). SO inspiring and delectable. Brava for your melancholy song, diva Sam!
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 4:08 PM
Was so pleasantly surprised, and delighted, with Craig's placement. The poems entered were amazing and Craig has high standards. The forest has a beautiful song - just like the ocean. In the solitude, we get to hear the forest sing. You know me, can't resist throwing in a bit of music! Your messages always encourage me and spur me on - a million thank you's sent your way with harvest blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 8:03 AM
A gypsy quilt of green transformed to crimson flame, scattered copse of Queen Anne’s Lace...just a couple delightful bits of imagery. Congratulations, Sam!
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 3:58 PM
I am so appreciative of your visit, your congratulations and your message Kim. Thank you! Many walks in the woods inspired the imagery. Was so much fun to revisit their delight! Hope you are well! Harvest blessings.
Fowler Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 6:45 AM
This has an underlying rhythm that's very appealing. Wonderful penning Sam. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 3:54 PM
Hopefully the cadence is like a walking rhythm. Thank you for noticing my friend. I so appreciate your congratulatory message. Happy fall to you with many long walks in the leaves.
Logan Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 3:53 AM
Sam, of all the wonderful lines you created, the last is by far my favorite. Congratulations on your winning write.
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 3:52 PM
Jenna, thank you for your visit and gracious message. It was a challenge to find a way to finish the poem. It makes me happy to know you liked the last line. Sending a harvest of blessings and abundance to you!
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 11:51 PM
Congrats Sam! this is fabulous!! brings a bit of Frost in as well!! Pleased this was placed so high!! well done
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 2:07 PM
Thank you so much Krish for your message and congratulations! They encourage me. There were so many excellent offerings. Your reference to Frost does bring a broad :) to my face. He is one of my favorites. Sounds like you know his poetry. All the best to you in this time of blessing and abundance.
Dutta Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 11:08 PM
I am mesmerized. Big Congrats to win TOP. Hugs.
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 1:59 PM
I am blessed by your message my friend. Thank you for your congratulations. Sending harvest hugs and blessings back.
One Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 12:29 PM
There is no need for an image for your poem as you describe it so well...
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 1:51 PM
Thank you so much SO. Have had many woodland walks with amazing discoveries hidden by time. This theme brought those forest adventures back! All the best in this time of abundance.
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