Walks-With-Sorrow

The sun sinks low within the sky as does his heart
For from his own true love he knows that he must part

Walks-With-Sorrow plays a song of lasting grace
To shield him from the tears cascading down his face

The silence of these woods brings him a sense of calm
And with his song he finds himself a healing balm

Way off in the distance there's a bride-to-be
With watchful eye just waiting for her man to see

The beauty and the ecstasy their union brings
Unaware of his decision she still sings

Songs of wonderment and glory she will carry
For today she gives herself to him to marry

But Walks-With-Sorrow knows that they can never wed
They will not be together in their marriage bed

Warring families forced them to keep their love hid
Passion for each other tribe elders forbid

So now he calls upon the skies to the Great Spirit
In the distance his bride cries but he can't hear it

Walks-With-Sorrow is a man so filled with pain
He'll never leave these woods or ever love again



By Deb Wilson
for contest"Tell HIS Story"
sponsored by Constance La France~A Rambling Poet~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Constance, Deb
Freeman Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:33 AM
Always a pleasure to see you at the top, Deb. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored fifth place. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations on your super win Deb in Constance's contest " Tell His Story". Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 9:01 AM
Deb, Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 8:46 AM
Very tocuhing story, Deb. Many congrat's on your WIN. Lainie
Maverick Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 12:08 AM
Congrats on the winning entry Deb, in the contest.
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:43 PM
my happy cheers to you for the special win,deb :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:21 PM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in Tell His Story luv.. for this stunning story so beautiful.. enjoy another top ten success luv..
Johnson Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:18 PM
Congratulations for this winner Deb. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 10:52 PM
oh,my you went with tragedy. This one has an excellent title to go with this sad feeling topic. I enjoyed it.
Pettit Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 8:30 PM
If Constance likes this, then I like it as well. Great ensemble of rhyming couplets.
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March 13, 2011 at 7:35 PM
Wow Deb, This is such a beautiful tragedy of forbidden love. Your words tell such a graphic story. The imagery is amazing. Good luck honey; reads like a winner to me... Luv Lay
Johnson Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 4:59 PM
A great job you have done here Deb. Good luck in the contest though I doubt you will need luck. Love, Joyce
Fraser Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Nice take on the image Deb. Your story would have rung true so many time as the tribes bartered all those centuries ago. Good luck in Constance's contest....:)
Maverick Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 2:27 PM
Sorry Deb! i have been responding to you after half a day in hospital waiting rooms sorry to get names mixed up, joe.
Maverick Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 2:23 PM
Great write here Linda-Marie, very discriptive, and sentient. All the best in the contest.
La France Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 2:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Deb, I like the way you were inspired by the image~~
Onclaud Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 6:58 AM
such a unique story you painted here, deb.. . this touched me with your languid images and style... winning luck to you!:) huggs, nette
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March 13, 2011 at 6:30 AM
A strong write on this powerful image.. I would like to wish you the best in the contest with this gem...luv Michael
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March 13, 2011 at 6:21 AM
VERY, very nice interpretation of the picture, Deb. Walks with Sorrow's story reminds me of the song about Running Bear and Little White Dove as well as Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet. Star-crossed lovers. A great entry for Constance's contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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