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Walking Softly

Walking softly Walking softly, I wander about trying to hide in the crowd of faces that appear normal but none that I recognize Fearful of making a mistake, I shy away from smiling, worried about bringing undo and unwanted attention to myself (as if that would happen anyway) Balancing between the why and how on a narrow ledge, careful not to slip causing the poetic ripples to move in a backwards motion For if so, the deafening silence would find me and take me to that place where hearts break and friends leave So here I am, worried that it has happened nervous about tomorrow hiding amongst the masses, walking softly… away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/29/2018 6:33:00 AM
The deafening silence is a heavy weight. I cannot imagine you alone. I do love that you transport my mind to your space. Incredibly visual, in slow motion.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/29/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thanks so much LT. That is a wonderful compliment, I appreciate your kindness
Date: 10/29/2018 6:08:00 AM
we've all been to that place.. that place where hearts break and friends leave.... truly amazing and relatable
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Chris Green
Date: 10/29/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind words.
Date: 10/27/2018 9:30:00 AM
i think most of us can relate to this one, chris. you've expressed those feelings very well - i especially love the "poetic ripples" line...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/29/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thank you so very much Ilene.
Date: 10/26/2018 5:30:00 PM
Don't be fearful of making a mistake. The muse wants to flow freely as your poetry does while everyone enjoys it so much. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/29/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. It is something that I guess many experience at times, I know I do.
Date: 10/26/2018 3:36:00 PM
Walking softly away in the shadows hoping no one had noticed that you were in the party .. like the write, Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2018 4:09:00 PM
Thank you so very much Eve.

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