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November 23, 2023

Contest : Quatern-Old Or New

Sponsored by : Joseph May

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Walking on golden beach alone, I see azure sea swell and fall, the waves rush to the breaking zone, splash on the sand and back they crawl. Sun sets where the sea meets the sky, walking on golden beach alone, I see crimson winged seagulls fly, the colors of twilight they clone. On broken waves moon shards get sown, from the sea blue night tries to seize. Walking on golden beach alone, I blow my heart in gentle breeze. In you my love will grow anew, when I am gone don’t ever moan. The footprints I will leave for you, walking on golden beach alone.

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Date: 12/6/2023 6:52:00 PM
Dear Subimal, the atmospheric imagery of your poem is poignant. A beautiful sadness spilled like tears from your golden pen. Melancholy so gently hued in your artistry. Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/7/2023 9:38:00 PM
Oh yes, I know the sleeping muse.. like magic, he will awaken and gift his dreams to your golden pen
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/7/2023 9:21:00 PM
Thank you, Susan for your kind visit and for your so encouraging comments at a time when the muse is in deep sleep and i am trying to wake him up.
Date: 12/3/2023 6:30:00 PM
Subimal, your vivid descriptions have painted a lovely scene. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/7/2023 9:19:00 PM
Thank you, Janice.
Date: 12/3/2023 8:25:00 AM
Very nicely penned Subimal, Congrats on your win
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/7/2023 9:19:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph for the placement.

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