waking up

~ you ~ are like a breath of fresh a i r stagnancy ceases with your presence oh! how I adore breathing now carefully inhaling lightness and creativity exhalation - just a chance t o b r e a t h e ~ again ~

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Paul Willason

Date: 1/13/2024 7:22:00 PM

Just an exquisite little poem...simple yet poignant. Breathed it in with pleasure...good one DD

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/13/2024 10:50:00 PM

Hi Paul, thank you! The words breath of fresh air when applied to a process or person just are so very complimentary - there are so many nice things to say but some hit just right. Thanks for stopping by :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/13/2024 6:55:00 AM

Sweet poem D. A new take on a love poem.. and there is nothing more precious than the air that we Breathe. Loved it.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/13/2024 3:22:00 PM

Thanks SV, the expression of being a breath of fresh air lingered in my head earlier and I felt compelled to write something with it in x

John Lawless

Date: 1/13/2024 5:48:00 AM

short, taut, and too the point. Would that each breath be so wonderful. Nice job DD kinda set the bar high for you contest

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/13/2024 5:57:00 AM

Aww please do enter and blow this right out of the water :) (thanks for this lovely comment)