Waiting, Waiting

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rivers murmur, birds sing and streams whisper like a lullaby that soothes the soul wild flowers grow along a woodland trail and moaning, groaning trees creak in the wind as nature is waiting, waiting for there is a change coming soon it is felt in the air with that slight chill in the morn' oh, soon the leaves will be whirling down all the red, burnt orange, yellow and brown swirling, twirling, spinning in a dance then, there will be a frost in the morn' and snowflakes will be falling until, the woodland is a blanket of silent white waiting . . . __________________ August 13, 2022 Poetry/Verse/waiting, waiting Copyright Protected, ID 08-1479-857-13 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 08/19/2022 Third Place

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/23/2022 10:28:00 AM

Wonderful sense of anticipation for the approach of each season and each season of life Line. Congratulations for your win!

Constance La France
Date: 8/23/2022 3:02:00 PM

Sam, thank you so much for the, compliment, comment and congratulations ~

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/20/2022 8:05:00 AM

Your poem enchants with the beauty of seasonal changes Constance. I love the imagery both in your poem and image displayed. Congratulations on your deserving win in Brian’s contest. Blessings xxoo

Constance La France
Date: 8/21/2022 4:14:00 PM

Connie, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings ~

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/19/2022 3:50:00 PM

Dear Constance, the vibrant yet tranquil beauty of your imagery brings me to the center of the changing seasons. I adore the repetition of “waiting, waiting”. You plush poetic pen never ceases to amaze. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan P.S. I adore the beautiful watercolor as well..

Constance La France
Date: 8/21/2022 4:16:00 PM

Susan, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and watercolor, comment and congratulations, I like using repeating words, warm wishes ~

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/14/2022 11:59:00 AM

Well thought and done! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Constance La France
Date: 8/14/2022 2:50:00 PM

Rico, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings ~Constance

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/14/2022 6:50:00 AM

Wonderfully descriptive poem--enjoyed the imagery of changing season, Constance. Best to you.

Constance La France
Date: 8/14/2022 3:00:00 PM

Vijay, thank you so much for he compliment, blessings ~Constance