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A familiar sensation lingers, a sense of repetition, Yet, does it carry significance? A motion unveils its path in a certain direction, Guiding me onwards... time to watch my movements, closer. Yearned for a longer embrace as time elapsed, Did you ever glimpse my real? Perceived future forged, traced in the footprints of past... Ran to the hills, left standing, 'true love' doesn't exist, I still bear the love you want, Without, it's quicker destruction. No need for concern, just acknowledging the path my feet firmly tread. Living in the moment, stories of content, My pace differs from yours, and strength has limitations. In my journey's culmination, it's your presence I yearn for by my side, You already know this. It is not like it was never said... throughout. Have I got a long way to run Collective soul*

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Date: 12/15/2023 9:02:00 PM
The guys loved it, I would have liked these words spoken with a little more tenderness, your talking to her, not that hill. I do love what you're saying though, throughout. SV
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Date: 12/16/2023 1:52:00 AM
I am taken back by this, regarding the hill I completely agree with you... I see that now. Thank you so much for your comment.
Date: 12/13/2023 4:00:00 PM
Very nice Lee. I do audios too, though mostly with voice improvs
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Date: 12/14/2023 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Tom, I appreciate that. I do enjoy the audios it seems to have become part of my procedure when expressing :) cheers.
Date: 12/11/2023 10:50:00 AM
You read this really well.. You do spoken word very well.. deep poem also.
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Date: 12/11/2023 12:45:00 PM
Thank you ever so much for your comment. It materialize far deeper than I expected.

Book: Shattered Sighs