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Waiting For the Storm

overnight the summer heat left for dull the sun is hidden in the sky today all is quiet even that loud, loud gull heard a thunderstorm will come in the gray_ outside there is silence and a deep lull a strong wind is making the green trees sway_ I listen for the first boom of thunder a flash- and I am transfixed with wonder_ __________________________ May 29, 2020 Poetry/Conto/Verse/waiting for the storm Copyright Protected, ID 20-1256-581-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Inspiration, Lord Byron's, Cantos abababcc- 10 syllables per line Submitted to Brian's Choice 10 Contest sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 6/1/2020 4:41:00 AM
Highly atmospheric images well compiled - transfixed me!
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Date: 5/30/2020 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love when the wind starts up because my wind chimes start to play. I love to hear them. Enjoy your win and day.........
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Date: 5/30/2020 7:17:00 AM
Gorgeous write Constance; enjoyed it.
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Date: 5/29/2020 11:31:00 AM
I enjoyed this and it has a perfect ending. :)
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