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Waiting For My Girl

I await your entry through our red door. I know you will be stunning as before. Your sexy dress will be metallic blue. It will suit you completely, any hue. I adore everything about my wife. She breathes youth into me, allows me life. She’s coming, how I can’t wait to see her. Her entry, the power, is quite the blur. The beauty that emanates, takes my breath. If she wasn’t my girl, I’d fall from death. I walk over, grab her waist, and kiss her. Passion flows between us like none other. We now walk together out the front door, To a night of pure romance near the shore. Russell Sivey Entrant into Catie Lindsey's "Narratives" contest 2/21/2012

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Date: 2/22/2012 9:14:00 AM
What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Russell. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 8:51:00 AM
a breathtaking beauty Russell.. good luck in the contest luv.. visual delight.. soup mail...
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Date: 2/22/2012 4:48:00 AM
Wow-How beautiful love is-If all men could express such emotions to their wives,there'll be less divorces-beautifully done-Charma
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:13:00 PM
Great poem to write to show that you love her. Good work Russell.
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Date: 2/21/2012 8:58:00 PM
Russell, good luck in the contest.. nice and romantic...always..pd
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Date: 2/21/2012 8:51:00 PM
Aren't the two of you so lucky to have found each other. She sounds like Juliette and you must be Romeo! Hot stuff Rusty :)
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Date: 2/21/2012 2:39:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Russell. Thanks very much - loved your contest : )
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Date: 2/21/2012 2:15:00 PM
Luck to you in contest Russel, completed poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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