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Waiting For Love

A night so dark in central park a silence hanging in the air, and by the gates a woman waits with ruby lips and raven hair. She dreams of love, as mourning dove trills for his mate as birds will do; her heart on fire with deep desire while waiting for her lover true. Her silent plea where can he be, to make her wait is not his style; but his delay her heart’s dismay, it seemed so hopeless for a while. Then on the slope a thread of hope someone is walking down the strip; though light is dim she knows it’s him, a breathless sigh pours from her lip. His eyes of green can now be seen, his beautiful and smiling face; her dreams restart as lover’s heart held in a fathomless embrace. March 2, 2020

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Date: 4/5/2020 7:54:00 AM
This poem, my friend, is beautiful. What romantic imagery you have captured. Your poem was a joy to read. Congratulations on your win. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/5/2020 9:28:00 AM
Thanks, JC, I appreciate your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 3/24/2020 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, your poetry is beautiful stirs emotions and paints lovely pictures in the mind... Shirley
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/25/2020 8:00:00 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, Shirley, I appreciate it. John
Date: 3/24/2020 6:03:00 PM
a beautiful romantic piece John many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/25/2020 7:58:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jan, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Date: 3/24/2020 2:16:00 PM
A beautiful piece.. delivered with ease
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/24/2020 2:36:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lewis, I appreciate your comments. John
Date: 3/24/2020 7:25:00 AM
Beautiful flow and structure. I feel your poem would make a lovely song. :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/24/2020 8:42:00 AM
Thank you, Franci, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John
Date: 3/23/2020 8:43:00 PM
I could close my eyes and see the woman by the gate. It has a wonderful flow to it.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/24/2020 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Josette, I appreciate your thought and comments. Hugs, John
Date: 3/23/2020 7:55:00 PM
You do romance with style. Gong rats on your premium membership.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/24/2020 7:46:00 AM
Thanks, Richard, I appreciate it. John
Date: 3/21/2020 9:14:00 PM
Love the flow with the two lines of rhyme in each stanza.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/22/2020 10:46:00 AM
Thank you so much, Frances, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 3/11/2020 3:51:00 AM
Excellent flow and rhyme.. And there is a suspense in your little story.. You kept me waiting with her.. Congrats on your win John..
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/13/2020 4:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jenish, I appreciate it. John
Date: 3/10/2020 6:17:00 PM
John, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem and thank you for taking part _Constance
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/13/2020 4:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance, and thanks for hosting the challenge. Hugs, John
Date: 3/4/2020 11:47:00 PM
John, excellent flow and internal rhyme for this tale of anxiety and anticipation. This should do really well in Dear Heart's contest; you wove her ten words into the story seamlessly. Well done! ~ John
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/5/2020 4:46:00 AM
Thanks, John, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 3/4/2020 6:51:00 PM
WoW! John, I loved everything about this piece from the beginning until the end. We all deserve love in our lifetime. Was this for a contest? If so I hope to see you on the winner’s circle. I am a hopeless romantic at heart. Well done. PS when you get the chance check out my poem “ misfit “. Enjoy the rest of your evening my friend:-) Alexis
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/5/2020 4:31:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis, I appreciate your comments and visit. John
Date: 3/3/2020 1:40:00 PM
You deserve a great love in your llive John, you are a great and good person, and I do hope your desires and dreams come true. A very touching poem. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/3/2020 1:50:00 PM
Thank you, Jenn, I think we all deserve a great love in our lives. I'm glad you enjoyed this simple rhyme. Hugs, John
Date: 3/2/2020 10:34:00 PM
"Waiting for Love" Yes, we all have been there, feeling these emotions of the heart. The rhyme and flow is beautiful. I feel the love, longing and desire, within your words. I wish to save this in my favorites. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/3/2020 4:45:00 AM
Some people spend a lifetime waiting for love and some find it over and over again. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for your support, Brandy, and thank you for the fav. Hugs, John
Date: 3/2/2020 2:34:00 PM
Anticipation, we've all felt it. Very well done John...
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/2/2020 4:14:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie, I appreciate it. John
Date: 3/2/2020 7:40:00 AM
Perfect rhyming and flow John, great use of the allocated words and of course your romantic trade mark. Good luck. Tom P. S. Not sure about Central. Park though lol
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/2/2020 8:36:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate it. John

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