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He would enter the corral in the thick veil of mist, up long before daylight, fog christened the air The skies would be coral, and the sun glazed the crest Dust shrouded the heels of his old leather boots, and gathered in clouds around the hoofs of the mare. Born with the morning was a whirlwind of grief that had followed the storms of a night without sleep Endless were hours , without refuge's peace while he waited for sun to arrive and repeat Caressing the flank of her sleek narrow, frame, his favorite mare, Queenie, was the color of dawn He would gather her reins, for a moment of calm then, bury his face in her rusty brown mane He'd watch as the light slipped over the hills, smoothing the shadows, that haunted his world Without ever knowing the worries we found as we saw those same shadows, splay rapidly down, drowning his eyes, with dark circles and frowns Grief and the love of his horses, would ride, together, off center....wherever, to hide, and soften the hours, that waited for night For the house was a shell, and the bedroom, upstairs, became the forbidden, without her to share The nights, ever long, were just waiting to tear open the wounds that he couldn't bear Up at the sunrise, and out until starlight Where shadows grew stronger, and nights even longer Burning the daylight, until light was in ashes, then thrashing the midnight, with the darkness of mourning, wading through dust-clouds, to see morning's light Waiting for something to make it alright ____________________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/22/2015 7:05:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2015 8:22:00 AM
Way To Go! Cheers Carrie!
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Date: 9/21/2015 2:43:00 AM
Very wonderful write Carrie n another superb win! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/20/2015 2:26:00 PM
Great write and win...congrats
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Date: 9/20/2015 12:34:00 PM
I can relate to this one Carrie:-( many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/20/2015 11:36:00 AM
When dad lost my mother when she past on, he waits witnessing sunsets and sunrises, he waits for his life to end. There is this huge whole in his soul...nicely written, Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/8/2015 10:03:00 PM
Fabulous write, Carrie , a 7 Hugs Eve
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