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I did not see the hands of God today but it was more like angel wings and dress..Sara
Waiting once again Time seems to creep slowly now Each minute blessings offered Clouds sheer bridal veil Dot the heavens, beautiful Sun appears peeking through clouds. Still waiting same place Wind ruffles the limbs of trees In gust of ferocity, Cold uninviting. A break, only gentle breeze. Blessed life this glorious day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/20/2012 5:55:00 PM
rain rain, rain, waiting for the sun and pretty days....make mud pies and pond lilies....rock gardens and sunshine smiles.
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Date: 1/20/2012 10:16:00 AM
im always waiting lol. great write look forward to reading more!
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Date: 1/20/2012 8:30:00 AM
beautiful sunrise this morning sara, and a thin blanket of snow, enjoyed the breeze as well, thank you for commenting. enjoyed your well written poetry this morning, have a beautiful day, Cindy
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Date: 1/19/2012 12:45:00 PM
He is lucky who enjoys the blessed life with the glorious day of gentle breeze, loved and enjoyed waiting, bl
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Date: 1/18/2012 9:21:00 PM
Very lovely Sara...ENJOYED!
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Date: 1/18/2012 6:19:00 PM
enjoyed reading this lovely write, jag
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Date: 1/18/2012 4:52:00 PM
this moves down the page like a summer breeze, Sara. VERY nicely done!!!
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Date: 1/18/2012 3:58:00 PM
This is beautiful!!! Really love it, Sara, hope you're doing good! Take care!
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Date: 1/18/2012 3:45:00 PM
Smile ˜ Sounds very beautiful as though it were a wedding amid the skies of endless time in a place where love shall forever reside ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜
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Date: 1/18/2012 3:28:00 PM
Very very nice Sedoka Sara! I really enjoyed reading it this evening! Fantastic poem, one that I would be proud to call my own! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/18/2012 3:21:00 PM
I love this atmospheric piece, my friend
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