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Wait, and Then

~ As the week ends in stumbling hours of eve, may the sun kiss your lips while I sleep in the arms of dreams unrefined-- I may not be with you in gentle times caved by my need for privacy, but, remember me as I send you an embrace brushed by moonlight.. humbling myself in your presence not, still, wait for me to disrobe this stillness while you can, and then… remember days like other days, when I cuddle your delicate body against mine, oh so ready to claim our space: eyes locked tender and ablaze... O wait for me until then ~ 4/25/2017 And Then Contest for John Lawless

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Date: 5/30/2017 7:18:00 PM
Nette, this is a beautiful love poem.
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Date: 5/2/2017 9:27:00 AM
A wonderful feeling of longing in your poem Nette. Beautifully done.
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Date: 4/29/2017 12:46:00 PM
This is beautiful and so gentle. 'Eyes tender and ablaze', says it all. Wonderful.
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Date: 4/27/2017 7:18:00 AM
Wow!! I enjoyed this romantic write!! Congrats Nette, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 4/27/2017 1:26:00 AM
O Nette, what a beautiful poem you wrote! I always love it how you can paint with words :) Congratulations.
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Date: 4/25/2017 8:48:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it All the best for the contest.
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Date: 4/25/2017 4:45:00 AM
-A beautiful and romantic poem, Nette - Luck in the contest - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/24/2017 11:53:00 PM
This is a lovely lyrical piece Nettie that with just a little bit of changes could become a lovely song. Romantic lines that share so much. 7 ; )
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Date: 4/24/2017 11:14:00 PM
wooooo... beginning is intriguing the body mesmerizing :) 10 fold sweetie
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Date: 4/24/2017 9:32:00 PM
How so beautifully romantic and a fav for me! A7
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Date: 4/24/2017 8:47:00 PM
Strikingly stunning poetry, Nette! Best of luck to you!
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Date: 4/24/2017 5:22:00 PM
Tender and beautiful, nette. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/24/2017 5:06:00 PM
You have this tactile feel and emotion within every phrase. Sheer delight to read your eloquent poem, as usual!
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Date: 4/24/2017 4:59:00 PM
This poem is a euphoric masterpiece Nette. Your words are never read by me for they float to me and touch me and I absorb them as I gaze upon the page, Absolutely beautiful. Much luck my friend in the contest.
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Date: 4/24/2017 4:49:00 PM
Your mind set flows onto the page and we can relate with the moment portrayed, and where your words of seduction lead us, for the emotions cling to this piece like a second skin. Emile. #7
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