W I N T E R - the Haiku Style

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~Winter~ (Haiku suite) Winters approaching autumn mournfully whispers leaves on ground whither Squirrels run, stock food the trees starting to get bared weather gets more cold Snow will be falling kids will make snowmen, snowballs time to wear a coat. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010 October.24.2016 ~ Author's Notes: The Haiku is a Japanese poetry form or style.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/24/2016 7:37:00 PM

Dorian, this is a beautiful poem you wrote.I felt the winter cold wind today when walking my sister's dog. Winter is coming shortly.Born in winter does not mean I have to like it. This is a beautiful poem.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/28/2016 2:27:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Darlene, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D