Voyager

My youth was like a treasure map
in finest detail drawn,
experiences marker buoys,
of perils would they warn.
Islands of opportunity
places I dreamt of most
all littered with ambition
scattered flotsam on the coast.
Routes were laid and lines were drawn
all set in black and white,
the course into my future set
the outlook seeming bright.
But time and circumstance swept in
before I had made sail
and tore the rigging from the yards
the voyage doomed to fail.
The plans I made are ragged
like the mizzen on the mast
optimism's caulking gone
though it was meant to last.
So take me to the harbour
and push me out to sea
let me be blown by winds of fate
to what will be will be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Godwin Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:10 PM
More great Viv rhyme and flow. Thank goodness for all the little pieces of paper you collected with your words jotted on them because reading you has gotten better and better with each poem I click. This resonates the theory that life is what happens while we are busy making plans. Golden ... CayCay
Wigley Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 12:56 AM
Thanks CayCay, sorry for delay, I didn't realise until Paul Callus mentioned it that sometimes you don't get emails saying you have comments on your work. I'm sure I'll get in the groove, eventually. Viv x
Inman Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:07 AM
Great poem. -Que sara, sara- -The best laid plans of mice and men...-
Wigley Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 2:34 PM
Indeedy, James, the winds of fate blow us where they will, wether we like it or not. Regards, Viv
Nance Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Impressive voyage, what will be will be... :)
Wigley Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Indeedy, Casarah. Thanks for dropping by. Hope you and yours are well. Viv x
Turner Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 6:57 AM
Another splendid write,Viv. No matter how meticulous the plans, fate doesn't always want to tag along.
Wigley Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 10:30 AM
Hi Daniel, thanks for putting pen to keyboard. We all sail, at different speeds and courses. Viv x
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