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Voyager

My youth was like a treasure map in finest detail drawn, experiences marker buoys, of perils would they warn. Islands of opportunity places I dreamt of most all littered with ambition scattered flotsam on the coast. Routes were laid and lines were drawn all set in black and white, the course into my future set the outlook seeming bright. But time and circumstance swept in before I had made sail and tore the rigging from the yards the voyage doomed to fail. The plans I made are ragged like the mizzen on the mast optimism's caulking gone though it was meant to last. So take me to the harbour and push me out to sea let me be blown by winds of fate to what will be will be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/8/2016 11:10:00 PM
More great Viv rhyme and flow. Thank goodness for all the little pieces of paper you collected with your words jotted on them because reading you has gotten better and better with each poem I click. This resonates the theory that life is what happens while we are busy making plans. Golden ... CayCay
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/10/2016 12:56:00 AM
Thanks CayCay, sorry for delay, I didn't realise until Paul Callus mentioned it that sometimes you don't get emails saying you have comments on your work. I'm sure I'll get in the groove, eventually. Viv x
Date: 7/8/2016 9:07:00 AM
Great poem. -Que sara, sara- -The best laid plans of mice and men...-
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Date: 7/8/2016 2:34:00 PM
Indeedy, James, the winds of fate blow us where they will, wether we like it or not. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/7/2016 9:04:00 AM
Impressive voyage, what will be will be... :)
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Date: 7/7/2016 10:29:00 AM
Indeedy, Casarah. Thanks for dropping by. Hope you and yours are well. Viv x
Date: 7/7/2016 6:57:00 AM
Another splendid write,Viv. No matter how meticulous the plans, fate doesn't always want to tag along.
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Date: 7/7/2016 10:30:00 AM
Hi Daniel, thanks for putting pen to keyboard. We all sail, at different speeds and courses. Viv x

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