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Vow of Love

You told me you could never love a man again, because when trust is broken it never will mend. Give me a chance, please, to prove my love is true I promise to be faithful, and I vow my love to you. John Derek Hamilton December 05,2015 For Bid on my love contest Tammy Reams sponsor Honorable mention

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Date: 12/16/2015 12:50:00 AM
John, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT**
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/16/2015 11:28:00 AM
Thanks SKAT was simple rhyme but sometime simplicity has power.
Date: 12/14/2015 6:47:00 PM
yours is a gem!!!
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/14/2015 7:01:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, this was pretty basic, but thanks. Looking forward to your entry in my contest.
Date: 12/14/2015 6:02:00 PM
Very meaningful words, John. Congrats on your win. Sandra
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/14/2015 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, looking forward to your entry in my Happiness contest.
Date: 12/14/2015 10:39:00 AM
John, congrats on receiving an HM in the "bid on my love" contest:-) Alexis
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/14/2015 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Alexis I know it was simple but sometimes simple feels best.
Date: 12/14/2015 10:06:00 AM
John, nice words.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/14/2015 11:30:00 AM
Thanks James, not my best effort, but sometimes simple feels good.
Date: 12/7/2015 1:18:00 AM
Oh, so lovely and loving and romantic ... CayCay
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/7/2015 10:54:00 AM
Thanks Cay Cay, you really took the time to visit thank you.
Date: 12/5/2015 10:55:00 PM
Sweet, John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/6/2015 11:55:00 PM
Thanks Lin

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