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Voodoo

Swept away on a cold wind of sweet, burnt incense Drifting, fading…soaring Smooth words luring me away But nothing else matters but this. Take me. Carry me to that other place While I lay here flying. Living? Dying? Tranquilly thriving. So content to simply follow and be taken... …where are we going? No, no… just bring me, Whoever I am, I want whatever this is. Surrounded by clouds and shadows, Filled with more powerful fumes. Glazed eyes wide, unseeing. Feeling nothing and yet everything at once. Numb, I feel every grain of sand beneath me, Every chanting breath on naked skin. Each word a pressing weight upon my heaving chest. Swirling incantations bind me. Fear, confusion...calm. Earth, water, fire… creating that intoxicating air. The elements of the world forming heaven. A sigh of utmost content. Perfect, blissful….painful…? No, no… not heaven! Hell! Nerves set aflame. Constricted by an all-consuming pain. Chanting, screaming…..silence. Darkness. Darkness. Darkness. ….Light. Nothing. Empty. Breathe. Undead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/23/2009 8:04:00 AM
Congrats on "Voodoo" being featured. Vince
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Date: 1/22/2009 10:19:00 AM
I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/20/2009 4:48:00 PM
Sad, cold way to live. The imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/19/2009 5:02:00 PM
Deep writing here...well done! Congratulations on this poem being featured this week. ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/19/2009 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2009 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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