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Voices of the Dead

~^~ I lay in my bed dreaming fighting with the darkness, Like a serpent the memories come creeping; The voices of the dead are so loud. The past encompasses me like a thick blanket, I am trying so hard to push the pain away; The cemetery gate is opening wide. There is a hush in the rows of tombs and tombs, The voices of the dead are whispering; Finally I cannot resist any longer. I am falling into a dark void and I wander lost, Tossing and turning, murmuring names in my sleep; The tomb is wrapped in fog and vines. Standing before the cold engraved words in stone I fall to my knees weeping and lamenting; In the dark purple cloudless night. ______________________________ August 16, 2013 Poetry/Verse/Voices Of The Dead Copyright Protected, ID 08-499-399-16 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France Entered into the Standard contest, Screwed, sponsor, Rob Carmack, Judged 08/2013 Eighth Place

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Date: 3/31/2015 1:50:00 PM
This is my kind of poetry! ...A dark and deeply soulful write that deserved more recognition. Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 3/26/2015 10:29:00 PM
Deserved a win .....Seren
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Date: 3/24/2015 2:12:00 PM
I went and saw this won the contest too. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/22/2013 5:39:00 PM
wonderful write - and the last line was so unexpected but just perfect
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Date: 8/16/2013 8:52:00 PM
Wow, the final line I really enjoyed, it make me feel better, "The voices of the dead quiet tonight."! You have enlightened me with another tremendous write my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/16/2013 3:03:00 PM
- Proficient written, B.W.! - Good luck in the contest !!! - Wishing you a relaxed and pleasant weekend!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2013 2:59:00 PM
just awesome, my friend. So sorry to hear you and Violet kitty have been poorly - hope you're both feeling much better x
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