Voices Carry

doe raises head statue in the morning mist voices carry

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2013 4:36:00 PM

I remember this lovely one, Barbara. in case you were interested in my current contest, here is a hint: Cherries in December. Also you had one about a garden I had faved.

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/3/2011 11:48:00 AM

beautiful imagery here. hi Barbara, wonderful to read you. soup mail. love, shar xo

James Fraser

Date: 1/22/2011 11:55:00 AM

I can just picture them in the tall grass Barbara. Beautiful Haiku....:)

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/20/2011 10:24:00 PM

great write on nature here Barbara.

Nathan Hannen

Date: 1/20/2011 1:45:00 PM

A truelly lovely work, vividly descriptive, you can see the whole thing clearly in your mind, thanks Nathan

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/20/2011 11:32:00 AM

The deer always seem to come out in the open in early morning and dusk. Seeing such a sight in the "morning mist" would be a treat. But I'm thinking man must be approaching if she's hearing "footsteps on dry leaves." Awesome imagery and suspense at the end. Great haiku, LNC. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/20/2011 7:30:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Barbara. The best to you in the contest if you enter with this poem. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol