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Voices

One Voice Two Voices 3 or more Screaming, banging around In my head wanting to be heard I suffer I weep and beg them to stop But they laugh and scream at the hilarious thought. I hold the cold metal gun to my dome praying no one comes home. I tell the Voices today is your last. As a pull the trigger and wince at the blast... Darkness.. happiness...Oh me , Oh my Peace at last now that I've died... Whispering starts and then Grows louder as I thought the voices Gone.. but now but they return with Valor... So here I am with these lovely voices in my head... There is no peace even in death

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2016 1:52:00 AM

LaTrinidy Smith-Jones,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 8/3/2016 12:58:00 AM

LaTrinidy, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Harmony Raymond

Date: 8/2/2016 4:54:00 PM

Oh my goodness this is such a wonderful poem. I love information such as this when it is placed into a poem and the poet is able to break it down to where the details are simple; yet complicated by the thought of the character being represented. I love your poem.