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Voiceless Echoes

Voiceless Echoes Little voices underneath the slumberous sailing sun Little choices for their world that has become undone Who rejoices when their lives are shortly silently shun Who sacrifices for their cries that have barely begun Little hearts fluttering in the rain, raincoats of weathered pain Little mouths that speak in vain, echoes that have built the chain Little eyes that stare and strain, sorrows that sink the salty drain Little minds that do detain, selfless smiles in their world remain Voiceless echoes that reach the symphonic seraphic skies Minstrels in meadows, children rejoicing before their demise Breathless bellows, the machines stop and then we realize Our precious sparrows have flown the earth as we eulogize. Nov.22.2017 Choose A Topic Sponsored by: Russell Sivey D) Write a poem on the subject of: HEARTBREAK AND LOSS!!

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Date: 11/23/2017 2:53:00 AM
Excellent but sad write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/23/2017 12:03:00 AM
Such a sad write, ^WW^, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/22/2017 1:31:00 PM
Very sad. Wrote in a lovely way. GL in contest.
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Date: 11/22/2017 1:29:00 PM
Winged, a sorrowful but beautifully penned poem, best of luck in the contest !
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Date: 11/22/2017 8:08:00 AM
A very special poem WW with excellent rhyming! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/22/2017 7:56:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Line xx
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Date: 11/22/2017 6:26:00 AM
A rhythmic journey through deep emotions--well depicted feelings of sorrow--well written, as always WW--this is a winning poem!
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