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Locked high in the tower the Princess did cry No school for her that was the golden rule The King allowed her one pastime - she could sing She would retreat to her chamber whenever she could Her eyes sparkled with intelligence; singing was her prize She’s so blessed with talent, confined in the chateau Great inner strength inside made her such a winner Her voice, so light and beautiful, made her rejoice She shines like a precious gem despite her confines 02~01~15 Contest: Plucky two by Nine – ‘Cryptic Rose’ 2nd and 9th words to rhyme Words to be used:- Princess, school King, retreat, Intelligence, blessed, strength, light, gem ~awarded 1st place~

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Skat A

Date: 4/30/2015 7:53:00 PM

JAN, Congratulations on your win. SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2015 2:03:00 AM

Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/30/2015 6:38:00 PM

Congratulations, Jan, on your fun and well written poem for this very challenging contest! Great job :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2015 6:40:00 PM

Thanks Laura it really was a challenge and i am delighted to get a top spot:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/30/2015 5:45:00 PM

Hi Jan, stopping back to read your poem again, and to say congratulations for your top of the podium First Place win! Outstanding job for the difficult requirements to be met! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2015 6:05:00 PM

oh WOW Sandra I didn't know the contest had been finalised - you have made my day with your good news:-) I have to admit this really WAS a challenge am so pleased Vienna liked my poem:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/5/2015 2:57:00 PM

At least her voice was heart, despite being stuck in that tower. Great story.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2015 4:49:00 PM

Oh you must have enjoyed it to comment twice ML:-) Hugs Jan xxx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/5/2015 2:54:00 PM

At least her voice is heard, despite being locked in a tower. An adorable rhyme.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2015 4:48:00 PM

Thanks ML:-) Hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/5/2015 5:35:00 AM

very beautifully penned as always jan excellent pen dear pal

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2015 9:33:00 AM

Thanks so much Liam i do appreciate your support :-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 2/4/2015 4:50:00 PM

Good luck with this little gem 'Voice of an Angel' good luck in the contest, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2015 4:56:00 PM

Thanks as ever James I do appreciate your support:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Funom Makama

Date: 2/4/2015 11:26:00 AM

Beautifully written with an explicit craft shown as obvious as the scorching sun. Great piece, a wonderful share and a blessed read.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2015 11:54:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Funom:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/3/2015 4:50:00 PM

Outstanding, Jan! I really appreciate your poem because it is a difficult form to work with and you mastered it so well. Best wishes for the contest...I know you'll be there on the winner's list for sure! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 4:55:00 PM

Thanks for such a lovely comment Sandra:-) I have to admit I found this such a challenging form! Hugs Jan xxx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/2/2015 10:43:00 AM

So impressed. This contest is very difficult.Honestly I could not understand what to do first.I will try.You have managed the form and the outcome! Lo a beautiful poem.Love Jan always great.Your friend

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 10:48:00 AM

I have to admit I found it a real challenge Rajat especially to weave in the 9 words and to have rhyme too:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/2/2015 10:37:00 AM

Your words paint the scene with descriptive words that bring the essence of your experience into our conscious minds. Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 10:39:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Emile:-) hugs jan x

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/2/2015 8:24:00 AM

Nicely done! I haven't read this contest rules yet, but your write is great! You do great in all that you do! Hugsxx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 10:27:00 AM

Thanks Cas - it is a really tough challenge Vienna has set us! Hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/2/2015 4:55:00 AM

Any talent that one possesses a cause for singing is for the heart! Masterful verse dear, Jan, with a jewel of a message! Good luck on the contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 7:58:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/2/2015 1:34:00 AM

Very creative Jan... i did think about something similar to rapunzel at first... hope you make it to the top... best wishes... nad!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 7:58:00 AM

Thanks Nadiya:-) hugs jan x

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/1/2015 10:05:00 PM

Enjoyable poem, and fun to read, Jan. Always great to read your poetry!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 1:12:00 AM

Thanks Laura:-) Hugs jan xx

David Meade

Date: 2/1/2015 9:54:00 PM

I hear the song on the wind . . . enchanting and enlightening . . . her song filled the village with light and love! Nicely done dear Jan. 7

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 1:12:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment David:-) Hugs jan x

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/1/2015 8:30:00 PM

Very creative and magical Jan!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 1:11:00 AM

Thanks my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/1/2015 7:38:00 PM

This a wonderful story, Jan, so creative. I envision you as the Angel with the voice. Good luck in the contest dear friend. 7 Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 1:11:00 AM

Thanks so much Eve:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/1/2015 7:20:00 PM

Beautiful, both the piece and the poet. Seamless write, though the technical requirement is so high. You're a wonder, sweet Jan. A7. Keeping my fingers crossed for you in the contest...Kim :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 1:10:00 AM

Thanks Kim it really was a challenge to write this:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/1/2015 7:15:00 PM

That is a really hard way to rhyme and keep continuity of the story. You have done a fab job my friend. It is a very good write, i would not expect anything but. Good luck in the comp, i think youve got a winner. Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 1:09:00 AM

It was an incredibly tough challenge to include the rhyme and words but I got there in the end:-) Hugs Jan x