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Bang! She hears footsteps. She awaits her fate. Everything is a blur......... Did the unthinkable, and felt she had no choice. Tried to raise her voice but it remained silent and wouldn’t come to the surface. “Mam you are under,”..... as she lies on the floor covered in crimson red. 4-19-2023 Contest: V Challenge Words Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 4/25/2023 4:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Alexis. A very powerful read indeed. Your words give a striking impact. Take care. Emilia : )
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Date: 4/24/2023 11:44:00 AM
Alexis, your poem is powerful. You show us vividly through your imagery and vivid use of words rather than telling us the story! I am so glad we get to share the podium together - each of us with a different take on the same word. There is no place in this world for abuse. You have skillfully drawn us into that world and the pain! High fives and congratulations to you. Blessings.
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Date: 4/24/2023 5:29:00 AM
Alexis, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge. Oh the suspense, congratulations. !
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Date: 4/23/2023 4:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest... Alexis.
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Date: 4/23/2023 2:58:00 AM
- Sounds dramatic... congratulations on a great win, Alexis :) - hugs
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Date: 4/23/2023 12:47:00 AM
Voice unheard. A great picture is painted. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2023 10:39:00 PM
A gruesome scene painted in few words. Congratulations, dear Alexis on your win.
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Date: 4/22/2023 3:38:00 PM
So sad that these things happen Alexis.Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 4/22/2023 2:38:00 PM
Dropping back with Congrats on your win Alexis
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Date: 4/22/2023 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful write. Have a blessed weekend.......
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Date: 4/22/2023 1:12:00 PM
Hello Alexis. Congratulations on your winning. Nice poem. Thanks. Have a nice day.
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Date: 4/22/2023 7:54:00 AM
Dear Alexis, a powerful dramatic poem - sad, but true. Congratulations on your win. Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 4/20/2023 12:14:00 PM
Nice poem... Good luck in the Contest.
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Date: 4/19/2023 9:20:00 PM
Powerful and sad, Alexis... No one should take this option out
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Date: 4/19/2023 4:52:00 PM
A powerful verse Alexis, best wishes
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Date: 4/19/2023 3:34:00 PM
Such a reality check for all, to not take tomorrow for granted,
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Date: 4/19/2023 3:13:00 PM
a stark reality revealed by your poem...good luck
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