Vivaparus

Drifting on a stream, drawn by the tide- secure within my shell.. I hide

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Kristin Reynolds

Date: 9/16/2008 4:40:00 PM

Oh, have I been there, done that! We all carry an invisible shell around, just waiting to duck into at times - retreat from it all and reflect - nothing at all wrong with that, for there is where we can truly SEE! Well written, as always, Kristin :)

Deneen White

Date: 9/16/2008 3:44:00 PM

I like the ring of this write, and at times I wish I could hide, sometimes great things come in small packages, thanks for your kind remarks. take care D-nyce

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/15/2008 1:08:00 PM

Wish I had a shell to hide in sometimes. Sigh. So well written, once again. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/15/2008 8:34:00 AM

This one could describe nature, or people...however you want to look at it. ~ Nicely done! ~Carrie