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Vitality

Some days I think I can fly releasing all these feelings inside no worry, no care, no gasping for air for you see, "I can only break I" I hope those feelings will last where thoughts remain in the past no falling down rain or covered up pain tell me, is that too much to ask So here I stand with the wind confessing all of my great sins not giving a care, who's watching where for who in this life, actually wins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/28/2018 7:21:00 AM
I think many of us have wonderful uplifting days like this Tim with not a care in the world... if only they were all like this.. but that's life. :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/26/2018 9:02:00 PM
All of your poetry is so relatable because it is so honest and raw. You have such a beautiful way of putting feelings in to words. You are creating art with your emotions.
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Date: 1/26/2018 7:11:00 PM
Again this sure resonates, I like these contemplative writes.
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Date: 1/26/2018 10:56:00 AM
Deep thoughts. Liked this piece. Sometimes...we just got to let it all go and know we are worth it. Hugs
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Date: 1/26/2018 10:55:00 AM
Deep thoughts. Liked this piece. Sometimes...we just got to let it all go and know we are worth it. Hugs
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Date: 1/26/2018 9:29:00 AM
Excellent Tim! I love the powerful first stanza :)
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