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Visually Challenged

arms my in you with alone found be finally can life of meaning the where around back me spin love my hand my take tide the with out riding or up giving be I should anymore me to sense making not motivation and will of lost town about all to burden a useless feeling down upside me tossing life round and round spinning

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Charlie Smith

Date: 3/15/2017 11:59:00 AM

dizzy me made. Well done Tim...

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/15/2017 6:45:00 AM

Good Morning Tim. You are a riot and skilled as well. Honestly. Visually Challenge is amazing and wonderfully executed. Score one for Tim this morning. Excellent in my opinion. Well done

White Wolf

Date: 3/14/2017 9:06:00 PM

First time I've seen a poem done like this, Tim! Very creative indeed! It's always good to exercise the brain muscles, Haha.

Sara Ella

Date: 3/14/2017 8:22:00 PM

Tim :) fun was poem this! :D sense makes it down upside iPad my turn I when

Carol B.

Date: 3/14/2017 4:41:00 PM

I love what you did here with this poem. Very creative and a really great poem :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/14/2017 3:49:00 PM

Oh..Reading backwards....Im putting myself in rewind...So beautifully romantic this is Tim.To be in the arms of our beloved...A favourite..I loved your style...Not easy to do I believe...But got the messagge.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2017 2:56:00 PM

- Skillfully upside down poems, Tim - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/14/2017 2:56:00 PM

Wow..this is quite a poem Tim! Your mind is extremely fertile to compose such a piece... it is far far above my pay scale yet a great experience to read :-) A fabulous title too. blessings, lynnxxx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/14/2017 2:53:00 PM

Lovely was that! ;)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/14/2017 2:44:00 PM

YES, IT CAN! Tim, I have difficulties in reading correctly arranged English sentences and you ask me to decipher your cryptic message? Have pity my friend! haha!

Darren White

Date: 3/14/2017 1:46:00 PM

It makes for a wonderful read, but a poem that asks for a hug :) It's great! I must say that this line could be used like it is, just to pinpoint confusion: " found be finally can // life of meaning the where"

Darren White
Date: 3/14/2017 2:25:00 PM