Tim Smith Poet Ode

Visually Challenged

arms my in 
you with alone 

found be finally can
life of meaning the where
around back me spin
love my hand my take

tide the with out riding or
up giving be I should
anymore me to sense making not
motivation and will of lost

town about all to burden a 
useless feeling 
down upside me tossing life
round and round spinning

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Charlie Smith March 15, 2017 at 11:59 AM dizzy me made. Well done Tim...

Lisa Ricci March 15, 2017 at 6:45 AM Good Morning Tim. You are a riot and skilled as well. Honestly. Visually Challenge is amazing and wonderfully executed. Score one for Tim this morning. Excellent in my opinion. Well done

White Wolf March 14, 2017 at 9:06 PM First time I've seen a poem done like this, Tim! Very creative indeed! It's always good to exercise the brain muscles, Haha.

Sara Ella March 14, 2017 at 8:22 PM Tim :) fun was poem this! :D sense makes it down upside iPad my turn I when

Carol B. March 14, 2017 at 4:41 PM I love what you did here with this poem. Very creative and a really great poem :)

Charmaine Chircop March 14, 2017 at 3:49 PM Oh..Reading backwards....Im putting myself in rewind...So beautifully romantic this is Tim.To be in the arms of our beloved...A favourite..I loved your style...Not easy to do I believe...But got the messagge.

Lynn Marie March 14, 2017 at 2:56 PM Wow..this is quite a poem Tim! Your mind is extremely fertile to compose such a piece... it is far far above my pay scale yet a great experience to read :-) A fabulous title too. blessings, lynnxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2017 at 2:56 PM - Skillfully upside down poems, Tim - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 14, 2017 at 2:53 PM Lovely was that! ;)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 14, 2017 at 2:44 PM YES, IT CAN! Tim, I have difficulties in reading correctly arranged English sentences and you ask me to decipher your cryptic message? Have pity my friend! haha!

Darren White March 14, 2017 at 1:46 PM It makes for a wonderful read, but a poem that asks for a hug :) It's great! I must say that this line could be used like it is, just to pinpoint confusion: " found be finally can // life of meaning the where" Darren White March 14, 2017 at 2:25 PM If I made you smile, I succeeded :D Tim Smith March 14, 2017 at 1:51 PM lol....don't make me smile : )

Ilene Bauer March 14, 2017 at 1:19 PM very creative, tim! it took me a while to read it, but i enjoyed the challenge... Tim Smith March 14, 2017 at 1:48 PM Thanks so much ilene

Arthur Vaso March 14, 2017 at 1:14 PM LOL Great! Not sure was it says about me that this was an easy read! Tim Smith March 14, 2017 at 1:18 PM I'd say happy hour has started...lol