Visually Challenged

arms my in 
you with alone 

found be finally can
life of meaning the where
around back me spin
love my hand my take

tide the with out riding or
up giving be I should
anymore me to sense making not
motivation and will of lost

town about all to burden a 
useless feeling 
down upside me tossing life
round and round spinning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/15/2017 11:59:00 AM
dizzy me made. Well done Tim...
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Date: 3/15/2017 6:45:00 AM
Good Morning Tim. You are a riot and skilled as well. Honestly. Visually Challenge is amazing and wonderfully executed. Score one for Tim this morning. Excellent in my opinion. Well done
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Date: 3/14/2017 9:06:00 PM
First time I've seen a poem done like this, Tim! Very creative indeed! It's always good to exercise the brain muscles, Haha.
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Date: 3/14/2017 8:22:00 PM
Tim :) fun was poem this! :D sense makes it down upside iPad my turn I when
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Date: 3/14/2017 4:41:00 PM
I love what you did here with this poem. Very creative and a really great poem :)
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Date: 3/14/2017 3:49:00 PM
Oh..Reading backwards....Im putting myself in rewind...So beautifully romantic this is Tim.To be in the arms of our beloved...A favourite..I loved your style...Not easy to do I believe...But got the messagge.
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Date: 3/14/2017 2:56:00 PM
Wow..this is quite a poem Tim! Your mind is extremely fertile to compose such a piece... it is far far above my pay scale yet a great experience to read :-) A fabulous title too. blessings, lynnxxx
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Date: 3/14/2017 2:56:00 PM
- Skillfully upside down poems, Tim - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/14/2017 2:53:00 PM
Lovely was that! ;)
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Date: 3/14/2017 2:44:00 PM
YES, IT CAN! Tim, I have difficulties in reading correctly arranged English sentences and you ask me to decipher your cryptic message? Have pity my friend! haha!
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Date: 3/14/2017 1:46:00 PM
It makes for a wonderful read, but a poem that asks for a hug :) It's great! I must say that this line could be used like it is, just to pinpoint confusion: " found be finally can // life of meaning the where"
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Darren White
Date: 3/14/2017 2:25:00 PM
If I made you smile, I succeeded :D
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/14/2017 1:51:00 PM
lol....don't make me smile : )
Date: 3/14/2017 1:19:00 PM
very creative, tim! it took me a while to read it, but i enjoyed the challenge...
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/14/2017 1:48:00 PM
Thanks so much ilene
Date: 3/14/2017 1:14:00 PM
LOL Great! Not sure was it says about me that this was an easy read!
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/14/2017 1:18:00 PM
I'd say happy hour has started...lol
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