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I meander down the verdant valley, Facile to descend the well known smooth path, Occasionally I halt so overwhelmed: How exhilarating is the feel of May. The birds whirling above the grove below. How they love to fly in and out of trees, While here and there new born lambs and sheep graze The luscious grass that grow on the hill side. I arrive at the grove, trees all around, such a familiar place after all those years, and as expected there in the middle was the old and gnarled oak tree we loved so much. On the trunk still chiselled, a heart and our names. That's where we first met, my loving wife and I. Now that she's in heaven, I still shed a tear. For she will always be mine, never to part.

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Date: 1/24/2024 10:29:00 AM
Whatsoever God has joined together let not man put asunder. I can feel the love in this one. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 5/18/2021 9:02:00 AM
Those moments of tender love always stay with us in the area they happen. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/17/2021 3:57:00 AM
The romantic steps you take, enjoying in reminisce and surrendering to tears of love that will never leave you. That lovely trunk with your pair of initials. God bless!
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Date: 5/16/2021 4:25:00 PM
WoW! Victor, You penned such a beautiful, nostalgic, romantic write. Thanks for sharing such lovely memories. Well done. PS, I took a mini-break from the soup:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/16/2021 2:40:00 PM
Just because one passes on before the other, it does not mean they are not tied by memories and past, It means they await you on the other side, beautiful words of love, she must be smiling from above: )
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Date: 5/16/2021 11:32:00 AM
- A place to remember the love that was born at that time ... the place is wonderful, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/16/2021 10:07:00 AM
The cool, serene setting awakens old memories and tender emotions and helps to reinvigorate them. a gentle and tranquil work Victor, I love it
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Date: 5/16/2021 9:48:00 AM
Heartfelt, loving memories of youth return in the beautiful, peaceful valley. A serene and lovely poem, Victor.
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Date: 5/16/2021 8:49:00 AM
That’s so tender hearted Victor, your two young hearts joined as one in a tree bark, a wonderful trip down memory Lane… Belle
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Date: 5/16/2021 6:09:00 AM
Nostalgic! Beautiful, soothing, heartfelt thoughts, Victor!
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Date: 5/16/2021 5:20:00 AM
This is so very special, Victor. Enjoyed it from start to finish and travelled within your memories. How love filled are the ending lines!
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Date: 5/16/2021 4:51:00 AM
Memories that keep you going, Victor, beautifully crafted:)
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Date: 5/16/2021 1:31:00 AM
Beautiful memories you have Victor, it will always be your special place. Tom
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