Get Your Premium Membership

Visions

My mind, pried open wide by the Open and honest truths that seem To be seeping through the open Pages of my account! I've been touched by confessions That have left deep impressions, There's a POWERFUL strength in A man who stands before the world With his arms open wide and held to The sky closed fisted and clenched So tightly that you can see the blood Being drawn and starting to run Down his arm. This is what I accept from God As a gift of wisdom. Accepted as such. I've come to the realization that Our ultimate destination as people Isn't going to be found on a train Headed anywhere! Go ahead and ride it and as you Go through tunnels and come out Into the sunlight again, Realize that is HOPE trying make Its way into your heart and soul, Our destination doesn't require a Ticket.. rb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/18/2016 10:09:00 PM
Rhonda, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things