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Vision of Empty Space

VISION OF EMPTY SPACE A circle of friends, holding hands, a stretch across lands, Tongues like fire, eyes shut, heads bowed All thinking of their one true love, creator God Strong link of prayer, appears Jesus in the empty space A mind-blowing, thought provoking, like no other Experience of power, love, the whole of all existence Like a daydream… Like a candlelight dance… A premonition, a prophecy, a light in the dark Like something quite tangible Truth to ponder A circle has no end Space between us is never empty It’s the air we breathe Living on like a million mirror projection Like a memory That is God Kim Rodrigues © 2017 My daydream beheld a vision. What a lovely thought.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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