~vision~

~VISION~

Way in to my vision
I can see it all over again! 
What once has left me,
has found my soul again.
My life has hit the boiling point of hot!
All my decisions have been put to a side to rot.
Is this my only destiny?
Nothing can make it stop!
Is this my only mission?
Is my life set on self destruct?
What happen to the passion?
Nothing can make it stop!
No one can hear my cries!
No one can pick my heart up from drop.
Around me everything dies!
Everything turns black and white,
only in my eyes.
I will now sacrifice,
the last purity of my life.
In this world made up of lies!
I have no need to want to survive.

The bad thoughts taunt me.
Only with visions I see!
I want this goodness to let me be!
I have no desire to feel alive.
I have no desire to understand.
I want all the love motions to go away.
I want nothing in my hand.
Only the five things created by my land.
I will torment these feelings I hide,
while I'm holding on to the other side.
WHO NEEDS DEPRESSION ALL OVER AGAIN?

       BY,I.T.
SKAT POETRY
Dec-24-2008
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Wolf Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 10:39 PM
I'm bipolar so I get this, nice job!!!
Raven Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Hi Skat, writing from the heart can bring forth the most heartfelt write, whether joy or sorrow. Your poetry always tells it as you feel it and that is important. All pains and joys have meaning, an excellent write. A seven and into my Skat faves....Vladislav.
Ngoma Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 1:37 AM
Hi Skatie...you triggered a subliminal hurt - dont know what it is, but I'm glad:-) 7habang
Ngoma Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 1:36 AM
Hi Skatie...you triggered subliminal hurt - dont know what it is, but I'm glad:-) 7habang
Antony Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 2:27 AM
Beautiful write.
Davis Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 9:03 AM
SKAT A very dark and deep write. The pain and torture you are feeling is clearly written and understood. Sending you some love and hugs to make it all better. Thanks for the great comment on my Abuse poem.
Sergi Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 2:11 PM
I LOVE THE DRAMA OF YOUR POEM
Poet Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:14 PM
soupmail.
Gasun Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 10:08 AM
A very heartfelt write making it an extremely wonderful & outstanding masterpiece my dearest friend & sis, Skat! You're highly creative, too. Kudos and big hugs to you! Thank you so much for sharing it with me tonight & your nice comments on my latest poem. Have a blessed weekend to you and your family/ love ones!. Thanks a lot again! love much 4ever, Leonora
Nwagboso Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 8:29 AM
Very emotional and well expressed. Thank you Skat!
Devnath  Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 9:30 AM
Vision is excellently adorned in golden ways depicting a beautiful image of many unsolved mystery of life. It's call WOW! Loved always, bl
Lwele Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 5:08 AM
perfect dramatic verse.
Kendrick Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 6:00 PM
Very deep emotive work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 5:41 PM
People are so afraid to talk about these types of emotions and as a result plummet further into the darkness. Excellent poem about a very relevant topic. Well done SKAT
Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 4:05 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
Galua Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 12:45 AM
this me me think of the things we know that will destruct as but continue to do so...the pleasure is just overwhelming...love this skat...^_^ v
Beesley Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 4:16 PM
i can dig it to my grave
Shetley Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 8:52 AM
Depression is a dark shadow that robs us of our joy and inspiration.... I appreciate your honesty in this piece. So many of us know this struggle.
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 9:26 PM
Just dropping by to say hi today! Luv, Andrea
Mannan Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 8:44 PM
I like this deep thought provoking piece. A great write. Thanks for your kind comments.
Murphy Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 12:47 PM
well spoken and well written just so well done thanks for all your kind comments and have a great weekend faleshia
Dufresne Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 5:56 PM
ain't nobody needs that Skat ! And I hope it will spare you!
Trevino Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 7:56 PM
nicely said!!!, who needs it lol, cool write mom, =(^.^)=baby skat
Knop Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 10:56 AM
So deeply felt and emotional write, SKAT! I do hope that you are in a better mood after having written this Dramatic Verse! Great write! And thank you for commenting "After Sunrise". Have a nice Sunday!...Love, Gert
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September 25, 2010 at 7:38 AM
Excellent sketch of the state of depression in this beautiful write my friend. Love and best wishes...Ravindra.....s. k. a. t
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