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Visibly Puzzled

A frail, gray bearded vampire sat under a tree, his sharpened canines ground together in exasperation. His young student left without him, to conquer the world, he scratched his head, visibly puzzled. How could the young be so evil, and how could they be so cruel? No honor entered the dishonorable student, he struck the teacher, from behind, ripped and clawed at him angrily, he blew the teacher away with one breath, visibly puzzled, exasperated, he clenched his fists so tightly, that his nails ate away at his palms. But he could not defend the honor of being a teacher, because the student he taught was much too strong.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/24/2009 8:37:00 AM
this must have been a rough time for the teacher,i have two friends who are teachers,and they passed from similiar situations,students can be arrogant,but definitely there are good ones too
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Date: 12/28/2008 10:24:00 AM
Frank - Welcome to Poetry Soup! Wishing you a Happy and Joyous New Year! Peace always, John
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Date: 12/15/2008 12:46:00 PM
Very creative! I love the life lesson that I see in this. I found the subject matter very interesting, really got my attention. :) Amy
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