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Violette Contest - Odd Thoughts

hear the happy skittle knows he isn't brittle laughs at flying spittal from the vicars see the sullen dancer living fearing cancer seldom wants an answer always bickers smell the Christmas fairy legs and arms so hairy makes me rather wary nostril pickers man who's always smiling messing up the tiling says he's done the filing wearing knickers thinks he's Jack the Ripper breaks another zipper eats a mouldy kipper pounding tickers LOL, pure nonsense but wanted to try this interesting form written 31st March for Mick's Violette contest

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Date: 4/16/2018 12:13:00 AM
Wonderful Violette, my friend, and a most deserving win - enjoyed this thoroughly! :-)
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Date: 4/15/2018 6:41:00 PM
I love it, especially the Xmas fairy and vicars. Congrats. That was a fun form, wasn't it? The difficulty was coming up with feminine rhymes.
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Date: 4/15/2018 4:29:00 PM
As far as I'm concerned, its one of the best. lol. Elaine
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Date: 4/15/2018 1:38:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Jack this is so so funny:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/15/2018 12:46:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Jack. Well done - you aced it.
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Date: 4/15/2018 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win. Jack.
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Date: 4/15/2018 8:30:00 AM
Hi Jack, Many thanks for taking up the challenge with this relatively new form. Critique: 100% perfect! A beautiful, fun Violette! Congratulations on your 1st place, many thanks for your support... Mick
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Date: 4/13/2018 6:51:00 PM
You have some very humorous images in this violette, Jack. Hope I never run into that "hairy fairy." LOL Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/12/2018 9:36:00 AM
Love your pure nonsense jack, it makes sense to me...
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:28:00 AM
Has good flow and a lot of nonsense or is it? Reads like a good contender. Way to go. Sara...
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:13:00 AM
Lovely nonsense. A pleasant read this morning, Jack.
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Date: 3/31/2018 4:34:00 PM
HA. it truly is even more interesting with YOUR spin on it, this form, Jack. I love how you did it!!
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Date: 3/31/2018 4:20:00 PM
You say pure nonsense...I say witty and entertaining, Jack:) ~ Wishing you a Happy Easter, my friend. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/31/2018 3:43:00 PM
some great humourous lines Jack!:-) hugs Jan xx
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